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loose ends
Life is a tangible mess
Tangled loose ends
Tethered only by truths
Frayed by little white lies
Tangled loose ends
Tethered only by truths
Frayed by little white lies
Published 25th Mar 2016
| Edited 2nd Apr 2016
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The author encourages honest critique.
2nd Apr 2016 3:14pm
You've said a lot here. It's power-packed in its brevity. One suggestion because you've requested honest critique: do you really need "the" in the last line?
2nd Apr 2016 3:52pm
