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Bitch Goddess
I'm not a Bitch
I'm the Bitch Goddess
And yup
That's me being modest
I can be a royal cunt
So dont Piss me off
You little runt
Get on my bad side
And see what you get
If you think a few cuss words are all
You ain't seen shit yet
I'm the queen of mean
The craziest Bitch
You've ever seen
So remember these words Im sayin
Cause you little prick
I'm not fucking playin
I'm the Bitch Goddess
And yup
That's me being modest
I can be a royal cunt
So dont Piss me off
You little runt
Get on my bad side
And see what you get
If you think a few cuss words are all
You ain't seen shit yet
I'm the queen of mean
The craziest Bitch
You've ever seen
So remember these words Im sayin
Cause you little prick
I'm not fucking playin
Published 23rd Mar 2016
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23rd Mar 2016 9:01pm
23rd Mar 2016 9:03pm
23rd Mar 2016 9:39pm
25th Mar 2016 7:16am
I enjoyed your positive rant thoroughly, refreshing. You have a beautiful naturally occurring rhythm.
sometimes I don't trust myself
when the syllables shift,
but then I say, hey, lets do it like this. :)
sometimes I don't trust myself
when the syllables shift,
but then I say, hey, lets do it like this. :)
I like the fervor and fierceness in your words, but after reading a couple poems...
I would suggest less rhyme, or different diction. Meaning, don't place all the rhyme words at the end of every other sentence. The metronome effect this will improve. Or don't rhyme at all, because it's usually not beneficial to your expression and flow. This will create a more appealing off-rhyme effect. Pay more attention to this, because it's a simple way to improve your writing without really doing anything more than placing the words in a different sequence. My newest poem is a great example. However, I didn't consciously do it that way as it will become more innate and natural the more you write..
Have a great day, enjoyed...
I would suggest less rhyme, or different diction. Meaning, don't place all the rhyme words at the end of every other sentence. The metronome effect this will improve. Or don't rhyme at all, because it's usually not beneficial to your expression and flow. This will create a more appealing off-rhyme effect. Pay more attention to this, because it's a simple way to improve your writing without really doing anything more than placing the words in a different sequence. My newest poem is a great example. However, I didn't consciously do it that way as it will become more innate and natural the more you write..
Have a great day, enjoyed...
30th Oct 2016 8:48pm
sounds very dangerous, we'll have to be careful
very fun to read, lots of energy and your flow is dope..
well down
very fun to read, lots of energy and your flow is dope..
well down
