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leave me alone...
I can't tell you how
it feels, you'd have to feel it for
yourself, and no, that isn't
what I meant, but therein
lies the problem...
Written by
dartford
(Paul S...)
Published 22nd Mar 2016
| Edited 23rd Mar 2016
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Re. leave me alone...
23rd Mar 2016 6:04am
"I feel your pain, but ne'er yr Gain".....Ha! how freekin witty, eh?
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Re: Re. leave me alone...
23rd Mar 2016 10:43pm
Re. leave me alone...
23rd Mar 2016 12:55pm
Re: Re. leave me alone...
I just think that trying to
express feeling with
words alone is like
trying to play Beethoven's
fifth on a brick...
express feeling with
words alone is like
trying to play Beethoven's
fifth on a brick...
Re. leave me alone...
23rd Mar 2016 8:58pm
Ah, the art of alienation. Sometimes it sucks to be all of us. Heartfelt little write you have here. Thank you.
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Re: Re. leave me alone...
23rd Mar 2016 10:49pm
Re. leave me alone...
24th Mar 2016 11:32am
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25th Mar 2016 1:49am
Re. leave me alone...
25th Mar 2016 1:22pm
that's a chat up line of quality - 'you have to feel it for yourself' - if you don't mind I may well use that this weekend, :-)
Like - very clever :-)
Like - very clever :-)
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