'Assimilation'

I've got a smile on my dial PM ... :)
Well versed my friend ....

Aaaawwww n u must've dialed me becuz ur comment gave me one too!
Thank u my dear lady :) appreciate u
much :)

well done.

two points i loved>>

"n' I could spend lifetimes
on this musing of her
as I spin..."
^ Liked this because of the way you broke up the visual aspects of the poem.  Also,  beginning and ending the verse the the "n" consonant had a euphonious feel .

"as I become her 'skin...' "
^ wonderful imagery!!  

Very flattered n grateful for your thoughts... Truly appreciate the support :)

i like the smooth transition from
delicate and soft
to deep and sensual..

as I become her 'skin...'

as Leethal would say:
excellent dismount my brotha

What's up my poetic bro? Feels like yrs. since I last heard from u lol
But I see u still carry around those
wonder-full praises. :) yea my man LEETHAL... Miss that dude too. Thanks big time bro. Appreciate it tons

Loving it 😉

Aaawww I'm Lovin that u are! :) thanks my friend :)

Poetikmind this is gorgeously double edged for me.
Soooo in the moment...skin crawling with goose bumps, sexy...
Then goddammit mind jumps 10 years to the fine makings of darkened symbiosis.
Here's to living for now. X LR

Yea the irony of your thoughts n feelings are definitely NOT lost on me
as usual this turns out to be nothing more than 'wishful fantasy' As I have yet to find one who will love without conditions... thank you
For ur support

Just had to take this little iceberg with me. Keep fantasizing ;)  X Lady.

Thank u for the RL add. I'm deeply flattered.

Ahhh, Erotic Ninja, luv ~ :-*

This piece is quite something. You have caused me, as usual, much intense and depthless thought with this incredible poem.

On the surface, this is an achingly lovely poem to this love. Underneath, it seethes with love and passion like unto that unleashed by the sustained release of the titanic energy of a supernova.  

It took me a long time to understand that for many men, expressions of love ~ the truest ones were invariably to be found not in what they said, but in what they did...and how they behaved when in the throes of passion was oft-times the very best indicator of all... :-*

There are some things which simply cannot be fabricated.  

Your use of language here and the gorgeous simplicity of this creation are truly exquisite, luv. What a poetic maestro you are! :-*

I replied to this 2 days ago I believe n yet, my reply is gone!? Smh... Anyways, many thanks sweetheart, I'm flattered beyond express n geeked
out by ur amazing comment! :)

Hey Poet.......this is hot stuff.......I really like you went from admiration to sexy adoration.......enjoyed......purple luv & hugs xo :)

Thank u flower, ur a doll n I truly appreciate u :)

Thank you so much Taryn, I'm grateful
always for you thoughts n time :)

oooh ai papi, makes a girl shiver
xo

Aaaaawwww... U will never understand how deeply grateful I am for ur support Katja. I mean let's be real, U are the standard! :)

I love the title as well as how you pulled the whole piece together in the last few lines and demonstrated how the title and those words come together but are entirely just one. I like the image you provoke there and how the image conjures up a distinct sensuality without chaining the words...you let it flow...and it flows nicely,

Many thanks my friend, truly I greatly appreciate your thoughts... :)

"as I become her 'skin...'" oh the places imagination flows, Lovely piece. :)

Thank u, ur time n thoughts on my ink are deeply appreciated  :)

Smooth & Suave Write Poetikmind.....Write On!  (Smiles)

Thanks bro. Deeply grateful for your support n yea, I kinda haveta, it's ingrained lol

"lickin' her body whole

strippin her entirety
completely
bare...

as I become her 'skin..."  you go Mr Smooth Operator *hi5* bro you laid this out beautifully... keep expressing that fire *big daps* :D

Lol yea I will do what I can bro. lol
Truly appreciate your kind words n support always :) peace n love to u n urs bro.

....crawling within...

I sure hope that crawling ain't a negative thing lol.  Thank you my sweetness :)

Aaaawwww sweet precious heart, you melt me with ur sweet praise. I can assure though IF no man has the balls or smarts
to go after you, they're probably dead lol... You are special, trust me. :) n thanks a ton for ur support :)

" "Wow...So precious she is
for me, like a breath
of freshest air

Her heart, fully filled
yet still with enough
space to reside within...

n' I could spend lifetimes
on this musing of her
as I spin...

Though, I'd  rather indulge
my greatest joy...

lickin' her body whole

strippin her entirety
completely
bare... " "

[As you become, become
become her skin]

Looks good on you :)



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Aaawww... Too bad for me that it's just a fantasy then huh? lol though it's one I dream of often :) thank u my dear friend :)

It's suddenly quite warm in here.  A truly stimulating image you have painted across this canvas.  And on that note, I'm going to sneak away blushing and a little envious of the lady.  :)
Willow

Aaaawwww... No need to be envious
she only exists in my dreams... But still I love ur thoughts here n am honored n grateful :)