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Is My Poems Even Good...  
Feel Like It's not Good At All  
My Life Sucked In Being Creative  
So Please Tell Me What You Like;  
I Don't Get Many Reads  
Nor Likes  
My Feelings  
Are Thinking  
On Everything
Poems Are All I Have  
But I Feel Weak That maybe  
I Shouldn't Write  
My Heart Hurts From All The Pain,  
 That's Shoots Up Through My Vains  
I Can't Take My No More ,
About To Scream  ....
If No Answer Shows,
When Looking At These Ugly Walls that I see
On How I Wish  
I can Break Them,  
For More Better Thoughts  
Emotion After Another  
I Know I Need To Stop Worrying  
On  What others Think,
But Damn That Thought
Of Knowing What Others Are Feeling Make me Wonder.  
.....
So As I Write Another Story Told.  
Thanks For These Reads,  
It's Time To Pray For Good Thoughts  
And not Giving Up  
On My Poems  
And Giving Me Good Shows for Comments
Written by HarleyQinn_2 (DarkSnake1010)
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