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Question?
Is My Poems Even Good...
Feel Like It's not Good At All
My Life Sucked In Being Creative
So Please Tell Me What You Like;
I Don't Get Many Reads
Nor Likes
My Feelings
Are Thinking
On Everything
Poems Are All I Have
But I Feel Weak That maybe
I Shouldn't Write
My Heart Hurts From All The Pain,
That's Shoots Up Through My Vains
I Can't Take My No More ,
About To Scream ....
If No Answer Shows,
When Looking At These Ugly Walls that I see
On How I Wish
I can Break Them,
For More Better Thoughts
Emotion After Another
I Know I Need To Stop Worrying
On What others Think,
But Damn That Thought
Of Knowing What Others Are Feeling Make me Wonder.
.....
So As I Write Another Story Told.
Thanks For These Reads,
It's Time To Pray For Good Thoughts
And not Giving Up
On My Poems
And Giving Me Good Shows for Comments
Feel Like It's not Good At All
My Life Sucked In Being Creative
So Please Tell Me What You Like;
I Don't Get Many Reads
Nor Likes
My Feelings
Are Thinking
On Everything
Poems Are All I Have
But I Feel Weak That maybe
I Shouldn't Write
My Heart Hurts From All The Pain,
That's Shoots Up Through My Vains
I Can't Take My No More ,
About To Scream ....
If No Answer Shows,
When Looking At These Ugly Walls that I see
On How I Wish
I can Break Them,
For More Better Thoughts
Emotion After Another
I Know I Need To Stop Worrying
On What others Think,
But Damn That Thought
Of Knowing What Others Are Feeling Make me Wonder.
.....
So As I Write Another Story Told.
Thanks For These Reads,
It's Time To Pray For Good Thoughts
And not Giving Up
On My Poems
And Giving Me Good Shows for Comments
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