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Delicious Duet
If I were a song would you play my tune,
Fall spell to my lyrics or be immune?
Would my melody serve to set the mood,
And you be privy to all I allude?
Lose yourself, sing along, aptly join in,
As this song turns to fire burning within.
Feel your body pulsate, to my rhythm...my beat,
As it builds in crescendo, an all consuming heat.
The change in tempo has now been set
And my song has become a delicious duet;
A harmonic collaboration, reaching feverish pitch.
Is it you or I who've now been bewitched?
May the timbre of moans serve to tell
Of this musical bliss, we now know well.
Every verse, every chorus an explicit account
Of how, love, this passion first came about.
Fall spell to my lyrics or be immune?
Would my melody serve to set the mood,
And you be privy to all I allude?
Lose yourself, sing along, aptly join in,
As this song turns to fire burning within.
Feel your body pulsate, to my rhythm...my beat,
As it builds in crescendo, an all consuming heat.
The change in tempo has now been set
And my song has become a delicious duet;
A harmonic collaboration, reaching feverish pitch.
Is it you or I who've now been bewitched?
May the timbre of moans serve to tell
Of this musical bliss, we now know well.
Every verse, every chorus an explicit account
Of how, love, this passion first came about.
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Re. Delicious Duet
13th Mar 2016 2:32pm
nice....this is a poem you could come back too with parts II & III as time went by ...welcome to D Underground....grab a victim & dance
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Re: Re. Delicious Duet
13th Mar 2016 2:43pm
Thank you, so very much!
Also, you've planted a seed in mind, of possible parts II & III; we'll see what happens in time. ;)
~C
Also, you've planted a seed in mind, of possible parts II & III; we'll see what happens in time. ;)
~C
Re. Delicious Duet
13th Mar 2016 5:12pm
This piece has a lovely rhythm and cadence. The word choices are intense, but light and breezy. Thank you for sharing, and welcome. 🌹
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Thank you so much, Jack. ❤️ ☺️
I'm truly honored and an admirer of your work.
I'm truly honored and an admirer of your work.
Re. Delicious Duet
13th Mar 2016 6:27pm
Welcome to DU Amid!! This is a great erotic ink done with such taste.......enjoyed this much.....look forward to reading more of you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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13th Mar 2016 8:10pm
Re. Delicious Duet
13th Mar 2016 6:46pm
I love your use of rhyme and meter, it gives evidence to the musical qualities of love you write about...
And welcome to DUP
geoff
And welcome to DUP
geoff
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Re: Re. Delicious Duet
13th Mar 2016 8:16pm
Yes, so very glad to hear that, it's what I was trying to achieve. Thank you so much, Geoff! ☺️
~Cyn
~Cyn
Re. Delicious Duet
14th Mar 2016 4:42pm
This is beautiful! Rather infectious. I keep going back to reread it. :)
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14th Mar 2016 11:50pm
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Re: Re. Delicious Duet
19th Mar 2016 4:27pm
Then I'm happy to have obliged. Thank you, lovely, for both the welcome and the read. 💖
~Cyn xo
~Cyn xo
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