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when it pours it thunders

when it pours it thunders--
 
we kissed in the rain
but there was no dancing  
but in my head, I was spinning
hoping are love was everlasting
the rain falls and runs off her brow
I look at her beauty as it pours down
and I wonder  
is are love like the thunder  
is it strong at first  
but then lose it's muster?
Written by sinisterpenz (Hellbound)
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