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hated
i've been nothing but kind
but i'm nothing but hated
yet i never know why
i choose to be there for others
but in the end they only hit me
i come with welcoming arms
and only get stabbed
i care for others when needed
only to have them wish me dead
i want to keep my smile
but more and more it hurts
soon i'll be just like them
empty and hollow
my happiness is cursed
always being taken from me
even when searching for a new one
i never find it, only a new hatred
but i'm nothing but hated
yet i never know why
i choose to be there for others
but in the end they only hit me
i come with welcoming arms
and only get stabbed
i care for others when needed
only to have them wish me dead
i want to keep my smile
but more and more it hurts
soon i'll be just like them
empty and hollow
my happiness is cursed
always being taken from me
even when searching for a new one
i never find it, only a new hatred
Published 1st Mar 2016
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2nd Mar 2016 8:06am
Stay strong man. Your write is cool. You got art and for that alone fuck them coward haters. Lol some lines don't flow as much as others but your getting the shit down good. Keep the write. Lol it's that jealousy thing you write Abought in this one. I no it all to good. Have created peace between the devil and God. And for that the river will flow for the richouse. A line out of a great song covered by Eddie vender and pearl jam called the patriot. Check it out respectfully. Get it out on ink man that's what I try to do. Lol coming from a man whose had passed many classes of anger management lol. Peace. Keep the writes flowing.
