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Moth
You!
Who took away,
My right to love...
You!
Who are you anyway?
You're not that sexy,
You're not that rich.
You're not that beautiful,
You're not that witty.
You're not that special,
You're really not that much!
You!
Be that as it may,
I still love...
You!
Published 29th Feb 2016
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29th Feb 2016 3:56pm
3rd Mar 2016 6:16am
Yes it is but we learn from it and move on. Thanks for dropping by AfricanLover.
Paul
Paul
1st Mar 2016 8:22am
3rd Mar 2016 6:17am
2nd Mar 2016 11:46am
Not only heartbreak, but heartbreak caused by someone painfully ordinary. Great write, was refreshing
3rd Mar 2016 6:22am
Love moves in mysterious ways. She may be just an ordinary girl yet the guy is still on love with her after she refused his love for her. I'm overwhelmed by your critique. I'm glad you find it refreshing.
Have blessed day ahead maggot1148.
Paul
Have blessed day ahead maggot1148.
Paul
20th Apr 2016 1:22pm
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