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Lost
Light shimmers
vibrations in heat...in fire
hate and anguished anger
Cause and effect...scorched earth
Walk a mile in self made shoes
Over barren lands
Mirages but nightmares in perma-day
Warped thoughts of twisted mind
Ever journeying
ever burning
A fallen Angels quest
to touch the sun
vibrations in heat...in fire
hate and anguished anger
Cause and effect...scorched earth
Walk a mile in self made shoes
Over barren lands
Mirages but nightmares in perma-day
Warped thoughts of twisted mind
Ever journeying
ever burning
A fallen Angels quest
to touch the sun
Published 27th Feb 2016
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27th Feb 2016 5:53pm
27th Feb 2016 7:59pm
Lost - and what a place to be lost - really sharp description almost sharp enough to cut yourself on - puts you there in that place :-)
a cool write :-)
a cool write :-)
28th Feb 2016 10:04am
Spectacular imagery and metaphors and the painting sets the mood perfectly...
JJ
JJ
29th Feb 2016 2:29am
"A fallen Angels quest
to touch the sun" great line. Strong piece.
Welcome to DUP.
W
to touch the sun" great line. Strong piece.
Welcome to DUP.
W
