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I'd Feel Less Guilty
Nights a favorable emotion
Comforting darknesses
Mood of soul,
Solitude
In recliner chair
Resting bones on the only furniture
Within mansion mind.
------Pushing companions
Out of shadows,
Shadows unfriendly dance
Glare with looks could kill faces
Laughs
Echoing, in blackness surround sound;
Thinking fills me guilty
Feel me, full of empty
Love
To pit myself alone
Through torturous depression,
When........
I'd feel less guilty
Chasing them away
An excuse to all excuses
Simply look at I, and run
For fear or disgust
Run!
In any direction other than mine dark,
Grinning more upon thoughts
Accepts
A little sun to shine through
Souls window curtains
Dimly
Illuminate the mind.
Comforting darknesses
Mood of soul,
Solitude
In recliner chair
Resting bones on the only furniture
Within mansion mind.
------Pushing companions
Out of shadows,
Shadows unfriendly dance
Glare with looks could kill faces
Laughs
Echoing, in blackness surround sound;
Thinking fills me guilty
Feel me, full of empty
Love
To pit myself alone
Through torturous depression,
When........
I'd feel less guilty
Chasing them away
An excuse to all excuses
Simply look at I, and run
For fear or disgust
Run!
In any direction other than mine dark,
Grinning more upon thoughts
Accepts
A little sun to shine through
Souls window curtains
Dimly
Illuminate the mind.
Published 26th Feb 2016
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Wots the saying, light can only reappear at the darkest point? I see a fight going on...or a westle of mind, to almost force the light in ? And how easy it would be to succomb
i like the imagery, like a haunted house vibe :)
i like the imagery, like a haunted house vibe :)
26th Feb 2016 5:58pm
I was hinting at that, the darkest point sheds in a little light. This person would feel a lot less guilty about solituding self if people gavr him a reason for this state of being. Not that im in any state of that mind. Thanks for reading TA. Figured I'd give DU a try Ed has been telling me about it for some time.
27th Feb 2016 10:10am
Love this one man, you do capture the light and dark very well man, that is something many a writer, even painter have tried to do, but few seem to accomplish it... You are natural at it man, very well done... You word usage here man, great, not a word wasted, but is used with intent of purpose, good writing man, just damn good writing mine friend... How are you: wolf
28th Feb 2016 3:24am
Wow that is a huge compliment and I am flattered, not like I try to master dark and light just try to capture the emotions of someone who can plant a foot in both worlds. Im good mine friend, looking forward to our next freestyle lol.
25th Feb 2024 6:20am
