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Die to Save You
I'm not here to save you
I'm not here to change your mind
I'm not here to hold you down
Or leave you half-alive
I came here to wake you
To open up your mind
Go on just close your eyes
Save your life
Do I gotta die to save you?
I'm not here to change your mind
I'm not here to hold you down
Or leave you half-alive
I came here to wake you
To open up your mind
Go on just close your eyes
Save your life
Do I gotta die to save you?
Published 18th Feb 2016
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18th Feb 2016 8:24pm
This is an interesting write Llywenllyn...
It reminds me of excerpts of dialogue
from "The Matrix"
But, it has an good feel to it.
Enjoyed... Dantalion
It reminds me of excerpts of dialogue
from "The Matrix"
But, it has an good feel to it.
Enjoyed... Dantalion
20th Feb 2016 11:43pm
20th Feb 2016 00:01am
20th Feb 2016 11:43pm
20th Feb 2016 00:04am
Great write, scheme and scansion are perfect. The way you ended the first and last line, (idk if this was intentional) but really brought it full circle for me. It felt whole. Overall, good read!
20th Feb 2016 11:44pm
20th Feb 2016 6:35pm
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