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Pieces of Jesus
In pieces i fall , exposed at your feet, in pieces maybe but not in defeat.
Arms wide open, palms out turned, a crown of thorns and sunbleached burned,
Unbreathing, undone, another nail and the damage is done.
Is the king of the jews , the salt of the earth?, or is he the devil in robes standing on hallowed turf.
We follow like an addict to the needle, like a scalpal to the vein, the joker behind the mask trying to ease his inner pain.
A handfull of nails, a crown of bloody thorns, a game of lost chances and jesus with horns.
Arms wide open, palms out turned, a crown of thorns and sunbleached burned,
Unbreathing, undone, another nail and the damage is done.
Is the king of the jews , the salt of the earth?, or is he the devil in robes standing on hallowed turf.
We follow like an addict to the needle, like a scalpal to the vein, the joker behind the mask trying to ease his inner pain.
A handfull of nails, a crown of bloody thorns, a game of lost chances and jesus with horns.
Published 18th Feb 2016
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18th Feb 2016 6:58pm
i may have to read this a few more times (cuse im a little slow) are you questioning your faith or that Jesus may be the devil? love the artistry in this piece, "the joker behind the mask trying to ease his inner pain." nice line...
19th Feb 2016 4:12pm
Good job, I think it's very good. I understand and can relate to what I get from it. Adding that one.
9th Jul 2016 10:48am
