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Hey fellow addict
If and when you decide
to make all your worlds collide
and just say no
Keep in mind
that it will be rough
detox and what not
you have to remain tough
You will need new rules
and new tools
to help you get through
the acceptance of
what will now be your life.
Rule number 1. Find new friends.
if you chose not to,
you're life will certainly end
Rule number 2. See rule number one
if you are serious about getting this shit done.
This aint no fairy tale
its much better than jail
and losing all that you love
Remember, you are never alone
theres always a phone
Go and make that call.
I will always answer and not let you fall
(entered in a contest) just wanted to share.
to make all your worlds collide
and just say no
Keep in mind
that it will be rough
detox and what not
you have to remain tough
You will need new rules
and new tools
to help you get through
the acceptance of
what will now be your life.
Rule number 1. Find new friends.
if you chose not to,
you're life will certainly end
Rule number 2. See rule number one
if you are serious about getting this shit done.
This aint no fairy tale
its much better than jail
and losing all that you love
Remember, you are never alone
theres always a phone
Go and make that call.
I will always answer and not let you fall
(entered in a contest) just wanted to share.
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Re. Hey fellow addict
16th Feb 2016 2:15am
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16th Feb 2016 3:43am
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Re. Hey fellow addict
16th Feb 2016 3:46am
A powerful message that must have been telepathically tapping on my mind, as I was writing a poem with parallel lines. Very strange, yet interesting to me. Excellent write!
JJ
JJ
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17th Feb 2016 1:26pm
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16th Feb 2016 8:08am
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17th Feb 2016 3:48pm
Thanks Jazz. Addiction and depression most if the time go hand in hand. <3
Re. Hey fellow addict
16th Feb 2016 8:26am
I like it I've already lost all I love and done the jail before I started getting it together nice write
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17th Feb 2016 3:48pm
Re. Hey fellow addict
16th Feb 2016 10:18am
Yea, but what if I can't kick my addiction?? (Pussy) it's a very hard one to beat, I mean lick... Oops I meant stick, uhm na I meant both lol sorry... For real, this was a great message lady :)
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Anonymous
17th Feb 2016 9:14pm
Mysterious, Stone Cold Facts.. great write.. with love..
Dave
Dave
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Re. Hey fellow addict
13th Mar 2016 3:51am
everyone needs to feel that they are heard ...the key is for them to feel that they are worthy of saving....nice ink :)
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13th Mar 2016 3:58am
Thanks sweetie. Once we love ourselves again, the light shines brighter with each new day <3