Forever, Valentine...

Beautifully romantic! Happy Valentines! That special someone will love your Shakespearean work of art from the heart! - blue angel

Thank you, it's a piece that's meant to be for all
those in love. lol I'm happy to hear from u again, hope all is well
n again thanks, appreciate the support :)

Beautiful poem ...poetik as always!

Aaaawwww sweet Grace! C'mere n let me give u a big smooch!
Mmmuuuaaahhh!! lol thank you, grateful as always for your support n kindness :)

Love the repititious flow of this peace...such a romantic...as always a joy to read your pieces !!

Thank you, it's actually a "formal" piece... Called a Rotourne (I of course
take a few liberties though lol)
designed to subject the first sentence
make the second one first n so on...
It's supposed to be free verse also
BUT I'm always breaking poetry rules lol... Thank u sweet one, glad u liked it. :)

Awwww this is such a sweet poem. Good job on sticking to the essence of it that is Valentine's Day!!

Thank you sweetness! N yea I tried to stick to the concept a lil lol... Appreciate u much :)

For me the part that's not easy is
Obeying the rules of form poetry! lol
But yea, it's as close as I usually come to doing a 'proper' Rotourne lol
Thank you my dear one :)

I am in awe of this...and of you. Fabulous write, P. Hugs and love. Your subject is very lucky, indeed. <3

Aaaawwww thank you precious one
I'm honored to have made your RL n
truly appreciate your support n sweetness :)

aww this is just sweet like honey. Lick her and love her down real good, she'll stay forever! ;) jk
Belated sweetheart's day to ya Rich! xo

Of course I will, right after you send her my way! lol n yea happy belated back to you my mighty "Reign-Ness"
:) thanks a ton :)

You're a true romantic soul, Poe. She must be so happy!  I like this amazing poem so much :-).

Aaaawwww thank you my sweetness!
I'm happy you do, n of course I'm always grateful for your continued support :)

This has a continuous flow to the piece, very centralized, lovely meditation on love, but what is even more intriguing is your use of repetition because its similar to how a French Villanelle is written. The Italians use a more lengthy, compact style but during the 16th-17th centuries, the French condensed it, focused on the imagery rather than description and still kept the repetitive flow to bang out a poem that focuses on longing, and fresh experiences cut from intimacy. Good poets to check out are Dylan Thomas, Sylvia Plath, W.H. Auden for English versions. if you want a good French version, Jean Passerat is good. The Italians mostly focus on pastoral scenes but some love versions, well quite a bit, do exist...but you're in the modern, clear, focused version. I dig this.

U may sweet sweet beauty touch me. Yea I'm aware there are classical poets who have penned extremely powerful n very emotionally powerful pieces, I have a habit of (attempting) to buck the traditional n paving my own  style, to which I hope I've at least  sorta reached lol...Ty so very much :)