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a sad song...
and when she pointed out it
was over, I said I wanted it to begin
all over again, but then she said
why don't I change the record...
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Re. a sad song...
14th Feb 2016 1:59am
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Re. a sad song...
14th Feb 2016 9:22pm
Endings are always difficult for the one that doesn't see it coming...great poem Paul.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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15th Feb 2016 10:24pm
ouchy and double ouchy - I would have smashed the record over her melon head :p
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15th Feb 2016 11:39pm