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'Juss 4 Da Hit of It'
She sips
from the tip
of the big dick
all to get it
hard... to stick
deep into
the whole
hole, where
all the sweetness sit
n' he suckles her tit
like baby...slobbers
n' spit slicks the nip
swollen from it, she
tightens her grip
while sexual hums
strum pleasure...
n' at their apex...
they scream n' cry,
"oh shit!!"
n' then they both
violently, joyously
squirt loads hot cum...
from the tip
of the big dick
all to get it
hard... to stick
deep into
the whole
hole, where
all the sweetness sit
n' he suckles her tit
like baby...slobbers
n' spit slicks the nip
swollen from it, she
tightens her grip
while sexual hums
strum pleasure...
n' at their apex...
they scream n' cry,
"oh shit!!"
n' then they both
violently, joyously
squirt loads hot cum...
Published 12th Feb 2016
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12th Feb 2016 3:36pm
I'm gonna need a big cup of water. Oooh wee! This was too hot lol enjoyed very much so
12th Feb 2016 3:48pm
Lmao a big cup of water huh? lol
Gosh, u made me blush now! n I thank you my beauty for all your support always :)
Gosh, u made me blush now! n I thank you my beauty for all your support always :)
12th Feb 2016 3:50pm
Damn... That was such a wonderful thing to say! I'm so flattered n truly appreciate your support my friend, thank you :)
As I would say, just for the fuck of it, baby. Let this one roll. All. Night. Long. Very hot indeed. <3
13th Feb 2016 9:42pm
Mmmmm yea sounds like heaven to me! lol sadly they took down the pic. I posted with this, the image certainly arched ur saying lol thank u sweetie
Appreciate u always! :)
Appreciate u always! :)
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13th Feb 2016 9:44pm
Wow... N I love when u love when I do! lol... Thank you sweetness, i love heating u up, n appreciate u too ;)
16th Feb 2016 4:07am
Such a nasty freaky pleasurer that likes to tease us juss 4 da hell of it ;)
....and we like da hit too...... ;0
....and we like da hit too...... ;0
16th Feb 2016 9:44am
N if dat ain't the pot callin' Da kettle
smokin hott!! lol... I'd be highly honored to tease n please U anyday
anytime, anyplace lol... But yea, thank u my dear for the support always :)
smokin hott!! lol... I'd be highly honored to tease n please U anyday
anytime, anyplace lol... But yea, thank u my dear for the support always :)
22nd Feb 2016 11:32am
Ahhh, Erotic Ninja, luv ~ :-*
You would think by now that naught would cause me consternation, naught would elicit blushes and (heaven forfend!) shyness. You would think that. Wouldn't you?
Well, luv...
You'd be wrong. :-p
This is so...so...sooo...earthy and lusty and I can hardly comment, I'm so...
Ohhh, you! You do this, you know. Do you want to know why it took me sooo very long to voice that particular poem of yours? (Mayhap, I already told you this; I cannot recall) I had to say it enough times to get over this...this...oh! You've done it again... ;-*
Excellent! Decadent, debauched raunchiness ~ there you have it. Whew! Your skills know no bounds, do they, luv? :-*
You would think by now that naught would cause me consternation, naught would elicit blushes and (heaven forfend!) shyness. You would think that. Wouldn't you?
Well, luv...
You'd be wrong. :-p
This is so...so...sooo...earthy and lusty and I can hardly comment, I'm so...
Ohhh, you! You do this, you know. Do you want to know why it took me sooo very long to voice that particular poem of yours? (Mayhap, I already told you this; I cannot recall) I had to say it enough times to get over this...this...oh! You've done it again... ;-*
Excellent! Decadent, debauched raunchiness ~ there you have it. Whew! Your skills know no bounds, do they, luv? :-*
22nd Feb 2016 9:57pm
Aaaawwww well if u trying to say
It moved you to 'enjoy' more than reading then I'm honored n yea, I would've loved a visual lol... thank you my sweet n hot poetic friend :)
It moved you to 'enjoy' more than reading then I'm honored n yea, I would've loved a visual lol... thank you my sweet n hot poetic friend :)
Now, just wait a moment here, luv. I didn't say THAT! ;-p
I just told you I was feeling a touch too shy almost to even speak freely ABOUT this piece. To do yet more...ahhh...
Truly, you are wicked to plant such in my mind... ;-D
I just told you I was feeling a touch too shy almost to even speak freely ABOUT this piece. To do yet more...ahhh...
Truly, you are wicked to plant such in my mind... ;-D
24th Feb 2016 12:34pm
20th Apr 2016 7:21pm
I honestly have no words for this one.....haha gonna need to take a seat and reevaluate my thought process! Well done, Poetik.
~p.g
~p.g
20th Apr 2016 8:09pm
Lol aaawww well as long as you don't faint lol don't want u hurting urself lol seriously, thanks so much sweetness :)
