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why love poems don't work...
I wanted to write a
love poem with a happy
ending, but
I've always found
that when it's ending probably
isn't the best time...
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Re. why love poems don't work...
11th Feb 2016 00:14am
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12th Feb 2016 4:27am
OMG, you've got it! End of love... insurance write-offs... love insurance. Who wouldn't take out love insurance?
Think of the economic benefits! Think of the fraud! Think of the litigation! Think of the penalties! Think of the premiums!
Think of the pay outs! Think of the 600 shots of whiskey!
Think of the economic benefits! Think of the fraud! Think of the litigation! Think of the penalties! Think of the premiums!
Think of the pay outs! Think of the 600 shots of whiskey!
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12th Feb 2016 11:54am
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11th Feb 2016 2:34pm
Ahhh, dartford, luv ~ :-*
Mayhap, when it's ending is when tis happiest betimes...
I suppose it depends upon the train wreck, eh? :-p
I so enjoy the way you cause me to think, luv. :-*
Mayhap, when it's ending is when tis happiest betimes...
I suppose it depends upon the train wreck, eh? :-p
I so enjoy the way you cause me to think, luv. :-*
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15th Feb 2016 8:21pm
the end is never a very good time to begin - you put it so much better than I could :-)
yet another wee cracker :-)
yet another wee cracker :-)
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