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Thoughts ricocheting against the Walls
There is always purpose in life
to give love to live life
to cherish a beloved, be cherished
Sleep eludes me, night grows old
Paths of tomorrow's journey haunt me
They're the beginning of an end
never venturing out of my home
never finding love, or achieved dreams
thats alright, I'll try again tomorrow
Standing outside the candy Store, looking
at all the sweets and candies
when you are in, indulge, in moderation
Thin wall between sadness and happiness
it rips open with each heartbreak
You choose to cry or laugh
laughter they say is best medicine
yet not so much less they
call the ambulance, for the hospital
*these poems are from my participation in an endless thread here. thanks for reading*
Published 10th Feb 2016
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10th Feb 2016 7:51am
True philosophy and stark reality at odds with what you want to be...
Well said!
JJ
Well said!
JJ
10th Feb 2016 2:14pm
Hi Poetryman...thank you for reading. Just thoughts random as they are... but they sure sounds like me...:)
10th Feb 2016 8:21am
This poem hit me in the feels, it really gets the point across. I can feel emotional instability in it, and it's an amazing thing to make someone be able to feel that from words. I can relate to this poem, and it captures different emotional areas that I feel not all would understand. The only critic I would give is that the ending isn't as good as the rest! Keep up the good work, you've got a talent (: xx
10th Feb 2016 2:16pm
Thank you so much for dropping by and commenting angietattooedgirl...honoured.:)
11th Feb 2016 00:52am
wallyroo92:) Thank you...I m glad you liked that. Thanks for reading and commenting.:)
Anonymous
10th Feb 2016 8:35pm
Grace,
To be so random, it really seems to hit close to home. I think I know where you're coming from....;-)
tornado
To be so random, it really seems to hit close to home. I think I know where you're coming from....;-)
tornado
11th Feb 2016 00:53am
Hi Tornado:) thanks for reading...always a pleasure. You know you are right there.
