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'What Mind's Visions View...'
Forgive me for slackin'
lackin' , in my mind's capacity...
For the instance it relayed
when I very first layed eyes
'pon such a beauty's audacity...
I admit it freely, I'd a loss of verbiage...
the 'nervous mess'
had gotten the best of me
you see...
n' I foolishly referred to you
as a perfect ten...
yet when given a little moment,
to truly view your beauty n'
comprehend...
it was quite clear you are far
more than a simple ten...
you are an unequivocal fact,
a rare, n' priceless Gem!
lackin' , in my mind's capacity...
For the instance it relayed
when I very first layed eyes
'pon such a beauty's audacity...
I admit it freely, I'd a loss of verbiage...
the 'nervous mess'
had gotten the best of me
you see...
n' I foolishly referred to you
as a perfect ten...
yet when given a little moment,
to truly view your beauty n'
comprehend...
it was quite clear you are far
more than a simple ten...
you are an unequivocal fact,
a rare, n' priceless Gem!
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Re. 'What Mind's Visions View...'
7th Feb 2016 2:50am
This is "unequivocal"ly beautiful..and that's a fact..as always I truly enjoyed!!
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7th Feb 2016 2:52am
Aaawww c'mere.. Mmmmuuuaahhh!! U sweet sweet woman u!! Thank u do much babe :)
Re. 'What Mind's Visions View...'
7th Feb 2016 6:56am
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7th Feb 2016 10:41am
Aaawww, well I'd like to think I'm smooth, but according to too many
in my life I'm just too sensitive
(A negative in their eyes!) but I do
truly love ur sweetness mami! :)
in my life I'm just too sensitive
(A negative in their eyes!) but I do
truly love ur sweetness mami! :)
Re. 'What Mind's Visions View...'
7th Feb 2016 7:10am
Poe this is so very sweet...and as always the Word maater...
Excellent!
Love
Jen
Excellent!
Love
Jen
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7th Feb 2016 10:44am
Well you know you have shown
in the past dozen or more pieces
specifically, that UR word matter
got alotta 'splatter' too! lol thanks babe, for your continued support :)
in the past dozen or more pieces
specifically, that UR word matter
got alotta 'splatter' too! lol thanks babe, for your continued support :)
Re. 'What Mind's Visions View...'
7th Feb 2016 7:34am
Ahhh, Erotic Ninja, luv ~ :-*
You write so divinely. Your words, oh, they steal upon the soul, whispering...never mind for whom they're intended, you weave meaning for all within. :-*
Ninja I named you and thus you are for we're stolen away by you before we know it...
You write so divinely. Your words, oh, they steal upon the soul, whispering...never mind for whom they're intended, you weave meaning for all within. :-*
Ninja I named you and thus you are for we're stolen away by you before we know it...
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7th Feb 2016 10:46am
And there she goes, waxin'
the poetic, makin' me frenetically
wantin' to reach out n kiss those sweet words from dem there lips!
lol... Thank you sweetie always :)
the poetic, makin' me frenetically
wantin' to reach out n kiss those sweet words from dem there lips!
lol... Thank you sweetie always :)
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Re: Re. 'What Mind's Visions View...'
7th Feb 2016 10:48am
Thank you Taryn, I'm happy
you loved it, n I'm happier still
for your continued support always :)
you loved it, n I'm happier still
for your continued support always :)
Re. 'What Mind's Visions View...'
7th Feb 2016 2:31pm
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7th Feb 2016 2:42pm
Aaawww... How nice to hear from u again lady :) thank you so much, I'm flattered n grateful :)
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8th Feb 2016 9:13am
Thank you! I'm happy n honored to have made your list, n appreciate the kind words n your time on my ink. Will be by soon to return the favor :)
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Anonymous
8th Feb 2016 5:46pm
lovely. I love it when people look better the longer you know them..I've had it work in reverse too. ;)
always a pleasure to read you, poetik
always a pleasure to read you, poetik
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9th Feb 2016 10:30am
Hey Mik! Missed hearin from u my sweetness, happy to see here on my page... N yea that reverse thingy...
I'm familiar with it sadly! anywho,
big thanks n appreciate u much :)
I'm familiar with it sadly! anywho,
big thanks n appreciate u much :)
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Anonymous
9th Feb 2016 5:42pm
my little one just turned one in December..been a crazy and very busy year!
I hope to get on more again soon ;) x
I hope to get on more again soon ;) x
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Re: Re. 'What Mind's Visions View...'
11th Feb 2016 00:45am
Aaaawwww... Well congrats I can imagine. loved those times when mine
was that young lol
was that young lol
Re. 'What Mind's Visions View...'
9th Feb 2016 00:34am
aww... thank you darlin' for writing such nice things about me. Wait, huh? It wasn't about me? My bad!...lol.... Oh this is just lovely Rich! Loving the person from inside out, accentuates their beauty just that much more.....
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9th Feb 2016 10:33am
Baby you know you're ALL that n a bag of Doritos! lol... Thank you my dear, n yup-truer words have never been spoken! Thank you soooooo much, I'm always n ever grateful :)
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10th Feb 2016 5:29pm
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11th Feb 2016 00:46am
Re. 'What Mind's Visions View...'
9th Jun 2016 5:06pm
Lucky lady! I've said it before...I'll said it once more...You've a beautiful way with words! :)
Willow
Willow
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