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unfortunately
the one that you are with wants you
only because you love them
in time you will see that what they feel
for you is not love but an overexcited
appreciation for your adoration because
yours is the brightest and most recent
i need you to know that as the seconds pass,
your gleam is fading and you are
already not the most recent
sorry
only because you love them
in time you will see that what they feel
for you is not love but an overexcited
appreciation for your adoration because
yours is the brightest and most recent
i need you to know that as the seconds pass,
your gleam is fading and you are
already not the most recent
sorry
Published 4th Feb 2016
| Edited 26th May 2016
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Anonymous
17th Apr 2016 8:55pm
Genuine love...it's a hard thing to come by.
26th May 2016 11:47am
Sometimes I can't see it any other way LP. Thanks for swinging by. Appreciated.
1st Jul 2016 3:36pm
Too much truth in your poem...unfortunately.
Is true love when you get to the point where you no longer choose to be with someone because of the way they make you feel, but because you've come to respect and enjoy them for who they are? If that is true, it is kind of tragic. Why can't we get to the place where we can't be without the other person because they are our best friend AND still have the passion?
Is true love when you get to the point where you no longer choose to be with someone because of the way they make you feel, but because you've come to respect and enjoy them for who they are? If that is true, it is kind of tragic. Why can't we get to the place where we can't be without the other person because they are our best friend AND still have the passion?
6th Sep 2016 2:46am
I believe they call it a juxtaposition of feeling Ms S. As vivid as it is, sorting it out is another whole position again. Good to see you Ms S. For you eyes and words I do appreciate.
4th Sep 2016 6:14am
Hmph. A stark and dystopian view on human relations, but I admire its penetrating candor.
6th Sep 2016 2:51am
My feelings on love are somewhat manic DC. As much as longing for true love I detest its existence. When dreams meet reality the effects can hit home from many directions. Heads up!! For your eyes and words I thank you DC.
6th Sep 2016 5:18am
This is a day in your life. I am like that too. My ups and downs are a roller coaster.
19th Apr 2017 12:07pm
Yes, I feel a fighter who specializes in the dark... this may be their preamble toward a foe... Great write!
6th Oct 2020 6:29pm
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10th Aug 2020 9:28am
Lotta lust out there which many confuse with love in a twisted way. Love out there too of course but real, true love is very rare.
6th Oct 2020 6:30pm
