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can you be patient?
Before the thoughts flood in to cloud
your judgment, ushering in rain,
clapping thunder--
Before you are dripping wet--
clothes, and all-- jumping at every
flash and roar of frowning heaven--
Before you give into madness--
reading pessimistic meanings into every absent gesture--
Can you be a little bit more patient? Stand ground a little longer? And maybe--- out of the kindness of your heart--
find out why?
It could be that the heavens break loose to answer the cries of a thirsty earth,
It could be that thunder is poetry in
light and vibrations,
It could be that my fist is clenched to welcome warmth
Can you be patient?
...
and maybe start asking why too?
your judgment, ushering in rain,
clapping thunder--
Before you are dripping wet--
clothes, and all-- jumping at every
flash and roar of frowning heaven--
Before you give into madness--
reading pessimistic meanings into every absent gesture--
Can you be a little bit more patient? Stand ground a little longer? And maybe--- out of the kindness of your heart--
find out why?
It could be that the heavens break loose to answer the cries of a thirsty earth,
It could be that thunder is poetry in
light and vibrations,
It could be that my fist is clenched to welcome warmth
Can you be patient?
...
and maybe start asking why too?
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Re. can you be patient?
30th Jan 2016 1:56pm
Whoa!! what a piece.... stunning!!! straight to my RL!! no words how muc I loved this one....
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Re: Re. can you be patient?
30th Jan 2016 9:05pm
Re. can you be patient?
30th Jan 2016 2:16pm
I felt the wind on my face as I read this as if I was standing outside somewhere by myself and no one around but me to here and feel this windy wind blowing as I patiently wait... And wait.. And wait
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Re: Re. can you be patient?
Patience is, more often than not,
chemical x. The missing ingredient.
Enjoy the view. Be easy
chemical x. The missing ingredient.
Enjoy the view. Be easy
Re. can you be patient?
30th Jan 2016 5:47pm
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Re. can you be patient?
30th Jan 2016 9:43pm
Excellent subject matter well conveyed. Perception is a beast if left to its own devices.
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Re: Re. can you be patient?
31st Jan 2016 00:46am
Re: Re. can you be patient?
I wouldn't tame it. Domestication sucks and destroys the feral beauty of its natural essence. I mean, cannot such bestial fire be channeled toward positive aspects as well? Like love, compassion, passion, determination, etc. It would seam to me that to destroy such a profound sense would be to destroy the inherent good it could create. Let us shed light on its darkness instead, thus transforming it into a powerful force of good to be reckoned with, and not soon forgotten.
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Re: Re. can you be patient?
I reckon it can. By all means, let the soul burn like a great forest fire for all emotions like love, if it is able.
But it should also be answerable to sedation in darker times, if we will it.
Yet another fence to sit on; tame the beast, but not too much?
But it should also be answerable to sedation in darker times, if we will it.
Yet another fence to sit on; tame the beast, but not too much?
Re: Re. can you be patient?
1st Feb 2016 3:53am
Re. can you be patient?
31st Jan 2016 2:22am
"It could be that the heavens break loose to answer the cries of a thirsty earth,
It could be that thunder is poetry in
light and vibrations,
It could be that my fist is clenched to welcome warmth " <--- Absolutely love this!
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Your message is powerful in its content....
It could be that thunder is poetry in
light and vibrations,
It could be that my fist is clenched to welcome warmth " <--- Absolutely love this!
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Your message is powerful in its content....
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Re: Re. can you be patient?
31st Jan 2016 10:21pm
Re. can you be patient?
Oh goodness.. ..eew, a pounce
on the heart
thank you my dearest darling for
this mirrored reflection. Think this
was a chalk board screech upon
a certain area of my brain..
not wanted ..but.. needed and
suddenly am appreciative..
-Howlings
on the heart
thank you my dearest darling for
this mirrored reflection. Think this
was a chalk board screech upon
a certain area of my brain..
not wanted ..but.. needed and
suddenly am appreciative..
-Howlings
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Re: Re. can you be patient?
13th Feb 2016 4:37pm
I appreciate you howling.
Always have, always will.
Glad you enjoyed this. And thank you for screeching words on this board.
It is a pleasure to hear from you
Always have, always will.
Glad you enjoyed this. And thank you for screeching words on this board.
It is a pleasure to hear from you
Re. can you be patient?
Anonymous
9th Aug 2016 6:52pm
Brilliant ink 💓
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