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CHOP
Grab and grope gripe and gag barge in the dark
No glint no glow no gleam no glimmer
The moon is a mouse chased by a cat
Chatter as unstable as the arara of jungle birds
Waking when our one faith is that the sun will rise
A last rum tot deified an epilogue to stale coffee grinds
And loitering wood smoke in the snug
Burnt pie crust soaky dishes disturbed
Creaky door to the dewed grass
Time to chop wood petrified yet dry from the barrel
Apple rot in icy air where the rain wall dripped
An olfactory of brake spit, wet brick
The acrid fenk of cat piss
I feel for the axe as the violet light turns lavender
As molten light cometh I chop wood
Before the awe of rising light I chop wood
No glint no glow no gleam no glimmer
The moon is a mouse chased by a cat
Chatter as unstable as the arara of jungle birds
Waking when our one faith is that the sun will rise
A last rum tot deified an epilogue to stale coffee grinds
And loitering wood smoke in the snug
Burnt pie crust soaky dishes disturbed
Creaky door to the dewed grass
Time to chop wood petrified yet dry from the barrel
Apple rot in icy air where the rain wall dripped
An olfactory of brake spit, wet brick
The acrid fenk of cat piss
I feel for the axe as the violet light turns lavender
As molten light cometh I chop wood
Before the awe of rising light I chop wood
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Re. CHOP
28th Jan 2016 5:09pm
An olfactory of brake spit, wet brick
The acrid fenk of cat piss
Love that line...
Really good read...
The acrid fenk of cat piss
Love that line...
Really good read...
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Re. CHOP
28th Jan 2016 6:42pm
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Anonymous
28th Jan 2016 7:32pm
I would fend cabin fever with this piece, but there is nothing insane about this. . .only the idea of being alone AND with the surrounding comforts to remind us that we're not as alone as we presume to be [but that's just my opinion';)]. . .Excellent ink, Whale. . .~Devlin.

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Re: Re. CHOP
28th Jan 2016 9:43pm
It's all about the peace - thanks for writing about the piece - enjoying your work as well!
Re. CHOP
28th Jan 2016 10:46pm
Re. CHOP
29th Jan 2016 7:41am
it's a worthy labor,
fuel for the furnace & firelight in the night.
takes a man w/an axe...
fuel for the furnace & firelight in the night.
takes a man w/an axe...
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Re: Re. CHOP
29th Jan 2016 7:43am
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29th Jan 2016 2:44pm
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Re. CHOP
29th Jan 2016 7:49pm
Think not that I intend to flatter. This is a most unique write. Never before have i laid eyes on a combination of words more strange than this and yet making some clairvoyant sort of sense.
I wish I could pinch and scour the frame of mind you were in when you wrote this.
Off with the wood!
I wish I could pinch and scour the frame of mind you were in when you wrote this.
Off with the wood!
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Re: Re. CHOP
30th Jan 2016 6:27am
Restless and in search of peace friend and I wanted the words to texture this - thank you for the comment and add
Re. CHOP
30th Jan 2016 1:14pm
if you can find inner peace or ego death amid cat piss & burned pastry; you're on the right track
xo
xo
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Re: Re. CHOP
30th Jan 2016 5:19pm
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31st Jan 2016 6:49pm
As molten light cometh I chop wood
Before the awe of rising light I chop wood
"Before Enlightenment chop wood carry water, after Enlightenment, chop wood carry water." ~Zen Proverb
Before the awe of rising light I chop wood
"Before Enlightenment chop wood carry water, after Enlightenment, chop wood carry water." ~Zen Proverb
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