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Take Me
Bite into my neck
Let your teeth puncture my skin
Make me bleed
Take my blood
Drink until I'm near death
Now I am forever yours
Take the knife
Cut your initials into me
Make it so it scars
Now every one will see
I am yours for all eternity
Don't be afraid to take my blood
I am only yours
Let me feed your life
Let me be your meal
Don't ever go to someone else
I want to be your only
I want to keep you alive
If you die so will I
Take my love
Take my soul
Take my blood
You can even take my life
I will forever be yours
I will love you for an eternity
Let your teeth puncture my skin
Make me bleed
Take my blood
Drink until I'm near death
Now I am forever yours
Take the knife
Cut your initials into me
Make it so it scars
Now every one will see
I am yours for all eternity
Don't be afraid to take my blood
I am only yours
Let me feed your life
Let me be your meal
Don't ever go to someone else
I want to be your only
I want to keep you alive
If you die so will I
Take my love
Take my soul
Take my blood
You can even take my life
I will forever be yours
I will love you for an eternity
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dude this is amazing
26th Jun 2011 4:10am
I love how you captured the raw passion and love,and morbidly twisted it into my darkest desires xD i loved it hun,thank youzzzzz
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26th Jun 2011 4:12am
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26th Jun 2011 4:13am
nice poem, if i ever meet any vampires that would be the perfect match for you ill let you know
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26th Jun 2011 4:14am
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26th Jun 2011 4:18am
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26th Jun 2011 4:36am
look just cuz i like to bite and have a thing for blood dont mean shit! So i got a blood/pain fetish,better than feet or clowns :P
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26th Jun 2011 4:38am
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26th Jun 2011 4:42am
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26th Jun 2011 5:01am
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26th Jun 2011 5:22am
Exactly! besides i can get off on anything,i just think pain during sex is cool. xD im weird i know
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metaphors
13th Jul 2011 10:22pm
"Don't be afraid to take my blood
I am only yours
Let me feed your life
Let me be your meal"
——the metaphorical power here is outstanding,
not to mention the erotic fever it raises.
I am only yours
Let me feed your life
Let me be your meal"
——the metaphorical power here is outstanding,
not to mention the erotic fever it raises.
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