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The Perfect Girl
Here's my definition of the perfect girl.
the perfect girl is a girl who has a great personality.
the perfect girl is a girl who won't let our relationship end in fatality.
The perfect girl is a girl who is awesome during sex.
The perfect girl is a girl who does not make our relationship too perplex.
The perfect girl is a girl who will make me feel loved.
The perfect girl is a girl who can give the best kisses and hugs.
The perfect girl is a girl who knows how to suck it.
The perfect girl is a girl who won't put m through a bunch of bullshit.
The perfect girl is a girl who will never leave me.
The perfect girl is a girl that I've never been with or seen.
the perfect girl is a girl who has a great personality.
the perfect girl is a girl who won't let our relationship end in fatality.
The perfect girl is a girl who is awesome during sex.
The perfect girl is a girl who does not make our relationship too perplex.
The perfect girl is a girl who will make me feel loved.
The perfect girl is a girl who can give the best kisses and hugs.
The perfect girl is a girl who knows how to suck it.
The perfect girl is a girl who won't put m through a bunch of bullshit.
The perfect girl is a girl who will never leave me.
The perfect girl is a girl that I've never been with or seen.
Published 14th Jan 2016
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15th Jan 2016 4:11pm
There is no such thing as "perfect" but one day you will meet someone who meets that definition or close enough to it. Nice write Justin.
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20th Jan 2016 8:55am
I can appreciate the project of writing down what you need in someone. Maybe I'll start writing here, and try the same -- I have yet to write about love/list or romantics. You've got me thinking and possibly even inspired, and that's what good poems do.
Thanks for following, and for the read!
Thanks for following, and for the read!
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2016 4:46pm
'The perfect girl is a girl that I've never been with or seen.' . . .What a great climax; never saw that poetic twist coming, so well done!. . .Enjoyed!. . .~Devlin.
11th Feb 2016 1:59pm
Wishful thinking...be careful what you wish for, you might not see it coming. Good twist ending as Devlin pointed out.
Welcome to DUP, Justin. Keep on writing...
Welcome to DUP, Justin. Keep on writing...
