deepundergroundpoetry.com
a real poem
you're looking for
a real poem?
one that makes you
laugh
cry
and shit yourself
one after the other
and then all over again
at the same time
a poem that wakes you
in the night
with how clever it was
its reasoning so deep
and profound
a poem you'd be proud
to write yourself
and publish
under your real name
not just online
a poem that keeps you
coming back for more
not just because
you didn't finish it yet
but because it felt
so darn good
you just had to savor
every last line
and share it with the world
well now
I'm sorry to disappoint
but this poem
even though its content
may be honest
and truthful of itself
it might not...
be the right one
for you
Published 14th Jan 2016
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 1
reading list entries 0
comments 4
reads 675
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
17th Jan 2016 2:30am
Very cute and clever and it took me by surprise - it's a good thing..curtsy bow
17th Jan 2016 6:40am
18th Jan 2016 12:36pm
Hello Abra.. I remember you. I went to this website today.. it's a first in a long time! You're the first name I could remember and type to try and link myself to my old profile.. I eventually remembered my login info tho.. I'm not sure if you remember me though.. I believe my spelling has improved drastically.. lmfao.. It might be a little poor at the moment since it's like 5 in the morning for me.. (:
I'm sure I could have sent this in a private message but I just wanted to state it out there you were always my fav supporting my "Works" I'm kind of just laughing now how bad my depression was when I was younger.. I was very over reactive. I've got a better way of thinking now than I did in the past.. I still you see post to this website.. I think that is amazing.. maybe I will post some updated works and start fresh to this website again.. It was always my fav during my 'hard times'
This poem I like the little twist you put on it in the end.. I did not see that coming! It made me giggle how you ended it so bluntly.. Just a little more I thought.. Ahh but I can continue to read some more of your poems (: Keep up the good work Abra, So many years have past and you're still going strong with the words! :P
I'm sure I could have sent this in a private message but I just wanted to state it out there you were always my fav supporting my "Works" I'm kind of just laughing now how bad my depression was when I was younger.. I was very over reactive. I've got a better way of thinking now than I did in the past.. I still you see post to this website.. I think that is amazing.. maybe I will post some updated works and start fresh to this website again.. It was always my fav during my 'hard times'
This poem I like the little twist you put on it in the end.. I did not see that coming! It made me giggle how you ended it so bluntly.. Just a little more I thought.. Ahh but I can continue to read some more of your poems (: Keep up the good work Abra, So many years have past and you're still going strong with the words! :P
30th Jan 2016 7:05am
Sure I remember you Rosy.
Glad to hear you've a better way of thinking these days.
Writing's one of the best therapies there is (& it's free) so walk the talk and get posting.
Best ~ Abra
Glad to hear you've a better way of thinking these days.
Writing's one of the best therapies there is (& it's free) so walk the talk and get posting.
Best ~ Abra
