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In order of fucking importance
Trumpets and Saxaphone played an "It's him" sound..
Thought to myself..gonna keep him around..
Then when i kissed him off and said "Goodbye."
After giving a sweet stroke to the manlygood that lay thick in a slant between pelvis and thigh...
He shoved me in his wallet like a business card...
"No!" I screamed! "Keep me near your heart, or at least your nice and hard.."
He says "But baby, i do keep them in order of best to worst."
"See!" he says.."I have you placed first."
Thought to myself..gonna keep him around..
Then when i kissed him off and said "Goodbye."
After giving a sweet stroke to the manlygood that lay thick in a slant between pelvis and thigh...
He shoved me in his wallet like a business card...
"No!" I screamed! "Keep me near your heart, or at least your nice and hard.."
He says "But baby, i do keep them in order of best to worst."
"See!" he says.."I have you placed first."
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 10th Jan 2016
| Edited 11th Jan 2016
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Re. In order of fucking importance
10th Jan 2016 6:14am
Re: Re. In order of fucking importance
10th Jan 2016 3:06pm
Right on...nuthin better for a gal than a giggle.. I am very happy it didnt come out all meloncholy. Thank you darlin...
Love
Jen
Love
Jen
Re. In order of fucking importance
10th Jan 2016 12:01pm
Yea, somehow I figured you'd be VERY Fucking important! It's no wonder you were número uno! lol
funny n saucy inking my dear :)
funny n saucy inking my dear :)
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Re: Re. In order of fucking importance
Swet darlin Poe..that is so sweet 😉 made me smile. Needed it. Thank you.
Love ya doll
Jen
(can you tell me why i cant get a photo upright?) nev mind! Yay me!
Love ya doll
Jen
(can you tell me why i cant get a photo upright?) nev mind! Yay me!
Re. In order of fucking importance
10th Jan 2016 3:08pm
Darksighs, my beautiful dear friend..thanks for the RL...
I love you tight!
I love you tight!
Re: Re. In order of fucking importance
10th Jan 2016 9:21pm
Sweet fondles Creampuff!
looooved your inklings last night-- had to hoard your 'tude to my list!
my sleepy eyes protested last nite[whitewhite screen] so I'm back fer proper commenting..
the deeply lain emotion is refreshing and your mind-- *sharp plus smirk-inducing! ;)
"He shoved me in his wallet like a business card..." <~~ fav of the owies
can't wait to see what mischiefs ur Jenpen has dipped into in my absence..
smother~loves from your witchy muffin,
~T
looooved your inklings last night-- had to hoard your 'tude to my list!
my sleepy eyes protested last nite[whitewhite screen] so I'm back fer proper commenting..
the deeply lain emotion is refreshing and your mind-- *sharp plus smirk-inducing! ;)
"He shoved me in his wallet like a business card..." <~~ fav of the owies
can't wait to see what mischiefs ur Jenpen has dipped into in my absence..
smother~loves from your witchy muffin,
~T
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Re: Re. In order of fucking importance
10th Jan 2016 9:37pm
You know i love your comments...but you know i feel you whether you do or not..
Oh my muffin...your poem! Just read and still in ink land dreamy cream utopia...
Sigh....and smile....
Oh my muffin...your poem! Just read and still in ink land dreamy cream utopia...
Sigh....and smile....
Re. In order of fucking importance
10th Jan 2016 5:27pm
Sadly beautiful my friend. You were his best. You have the angel's touch with poetry. This is really good my lover woman.
Love you with rapture,
John
Love you with rapture,
John
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Re: Re. In order of fucking importance
10th Jan 2016 5:58pm
Thank you babydoll...i'm so happy you got the drift..was not a thrill to be no 1 in the back pocket..
Honey love you more each day...seems impossible...🔆😊
You are my steady light..and smile when it is hard...
Haven't got to my reads yet...see you have a couple..Can't wait to read your always beautifull words....they save me so often.
Honey love you more each day...seems impossible...🔆😊
You are my steady light..and smile when it is hard...
Haven't got to my reads yet...see you have a couple..Can't wait to read your always beautifull words....they save me so often.
Re. In order of fucking importance
10th Jan 2016 7:07pm
Darling your words are Prozac when I am sad. They uplift me, make me smile, and make me laugh. You are near and dear to my heart. I love what your poetry does to me. You have made me young again. ;-)
Love you my bouquet of stars,
John
Love you my bouquet of stars,
John
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Re. In order of fucking importance
10th Jan 2016 7:53pm
Re: Re. In order of fucking importance
10th Jan 2016 8:27pm
Lol....sometimes...yes 😛
Thanks doll for the read . will most certainly be returning the fav...
Cant see what your pro pic says?
J🍒
Thanks doll for the read . will most certainly be returning the fav...
Cant see what your pro pic says?
J🍒