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What's On My Mind
What's On My Mind
I have so much on my mind
You don't even know
I wish i could just pause and rewind
I wish time would just slow
This is what's on my mind
so many things i think about
I want to freeze time
I just wanna shout
I can't believe time is moving so fast
I'm afraid to move forward and get older
But what other choice do i have.... the present never lasts
My life is like a filling up folder
This is what's on my mind
I wanna keep going as far as i can
Only because i don't wanna be left behind
But i wanna stay where i used to stand
These things are always on my mind
I really do miss those times
I wish i was a little child again
with all the long lasting joy
When i only knew how to count to ten
And every year on Christamas day expecting a brand new toy
Oh yes......i loved those days
Having a collection of barbie dolls
Playing with them in many joy filled ways
Never having to worry about the challenges to come or being stopped by a giant brick wall
Yes those were the days
You see this is what's on my mind
I look back and see
All the great memories
Starting from 5 years old
To my first kiss
All the way to now
And i think about how everything went by a lot faster than i ever expected
I wish i could go back to that first kiss
Or go back to nap time at five years old in kindergarten
Those were the days
When you could only see what the world looks like in a hundred thousand different ways
So this is what's on my mind everyday
You just didn't know it....
Until now
What's always on my mind
I have so much on my mind
You don't even know
I wish i could just pause and rewind
I wish time would just slow
This is what's on my mind
so many things i think about
I want to freeze time
I just wanna shout
I can't believe time is moving so fast
I'm afraid to move forward and get older
But what other choice do i have.... the present never lasts
My life is like a filling up folder
This is what's on my mind
I wanna keep going as far as i can
Only because i don't wanna be left behind
But i wanna stay where i used to stand
These things are always on my mind
I really do miss those times
I wish i was a little child again
with all the long lasting joy
When i only knew how to count to ten
And every year on Christamas day expecting a brand new toy
Oh yes......i loved those days
Having a collection of barbie dolls
Playing with them in many joy filled ways
Never having to worry about the challenges to come or being stopped by a giant brick wall
Yes those were the days
You see this is what's on my mind
I look back and see
All the great memories
Starting from 5 years old
To my first kiss
All the way to now
And i think about how everything went by a lot faster than i ever expected
I wish i could go back to that first kiss
Or go back to nap time at five years old in kindergarten
Those were the days
When you could only see what the world looks like in a hundred thousand different ways
So this is what's on my mind everyday
You just didn't know it....
Until now
What's always on my mind
Published 9th Jan 2016
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9th Jan 2016 11:49am
The beauty of this write is that you describe something everyone feels at one time or another. Some of us like to believe that there is a piece of our childhood that we never really lose. For me it manifests itself in the joy found in working with children, whether at the library, in a class, or on a court. Loved this.
11th Jan 2016 00:38am
Thank you so much. I appreciate your feedback :) And i hope you are ready to see more of what i have to right soon. I am looking for followers so please if you havn't already follow me and i promise you won't be disappoonted
Well okay but I don't think you should attach your compositions to who is or isn't following you! Write because you feel like expressing yourself, not because of a popularity contest.
i am not on here to be popular. I do love to express myself and just want the world to see my creativity so it is simply just a suggestion. And can be declined if the person wanted to. This site is actually a way for me to work towards a really big goal of mine. So do i care about popularity? Not really but do i like recognition? yes and when i see people enjoy my writing it's what encourages me further to never stop. But still i appreciate your advice.
