'Love Bite...'

aaaaawwwwww oh my lordi poe, this is just ugh feckin beautiful
"Let me...
hold you down
promises
to keep
I'll always try
with
my every might"
adore this vulnerable side of your poetry
xo

Aaawww... My sweetness, u make me
blush so much :)... Thank u, grateful
always n forever :)

Very Gentle and Smooth write here
Poetikm, with genuineness within.

I was going to copy and paste the same
lines as _shadoe_ but she did it first so,
I'll just say "They were what it's about."

  Excellent Pen... Dantalion

It's ok bro. Had u repeated her, I wouldn't have minded at all :). Appreciate your support, time n thoughts always :)

Such a beautiful poem PM...it definitely belongs in a book on love poems...so honest, capturing the essence of someone 'drowning in love'...
I'd love to hear those words spoken to me by a certain someone in my life ... maybe when the time is right I'll recite these to him... :)

Well you know, as alluring as u are, I'm sure u will hear them soon, n yea thanks for the sweet praise, I truly appreciate it :)

Hey Poet.....what breataking write this is.....so sensual and longing to luv another soul with all that you have to offer.....very touching.....enjoyed xo :)

Thanks my sweet lady, truly n always appreciate your kind words n continued support :)

"Let me...
love you now
even
if it
takes my life"
~~> first stanza is a melting beauty!
hits the soul akin to- "you had me at 'hello"..

Breathless & speechless are rare fer me.. but sweet dammits, this is gorgeous heart-stroke!!
adore the pure intent and soft flow.. missed your pen muchly, dearest..
darkling mwahs,
~d

Wow my sweetness! Happy to hers from u again! Thank You for ur very wonderful praises n ur continued support, appreciate it much :)

Aaaawwww... Wow breathless huh?
Guess I'm gonna haveta give u mouth to mouth... Lol... Thank so much for all ur support :)

What a romantic...such a sweet sentiment...oh to live a life with a lover like you...your words are so sincere ...as always a joy to read !!

Well I could seriously say I'm blushing
from ur comment! Hhhmmm, c'mon n let kiss u! Muah! lol thank u my dearest :)

What a romantic...such a sweet sentiment...oh to live a life with a lover like you...your words are so sincere ...as always a joy to read !!

Dayumn, I'm sooooo sorry I never caught this sooner... That's a wonderful comment u left, n yea, come to me babe... Plz lol ... N thanks a bunch :)

"Let me...
kiss
your heart,
with the fire
of affection's gown" love that stanza..wonderfully conveys sharp piercing intensity and passionate slow burning intimacy of a "love bite"  Bravo!! Really enjoyed this Beautiful Ink

I'm happy you enjoyed, n may I just
add you've got a sharp eye for noticing 'bites' lol thank you soooooo much my sweetness, always n forever
for time, thoughts, n continued support :)

awww... there goes that Sear's side of you again!  Such a softy! :) Love it!

There goes that "Sear's" side? As in the dept. store (Sears n Roebuck)? lol
Thank you my precious one, always
for everything you are n all the support you give, deeply appreciate it. :)

This is soo sweetly worded! like

Aaaawwww... Well I like that you liked!
:) truly appreciate ur support my dear lady :)

Such a truly beautiful poem! :)

Thank you! I'm very grateful for your thoughts time on  My ink :)