This Morning

I think your use of repetition here isn't advised.  Using "to" over and over does nothing for the poem.  It isn't a strong word, it's not a play on words (if you're poem was about twins for example then maybe I could forgive its use), it really diminishes the impact of your poem, not add to it.

I think the poem would be much stronger if you moved "to" to be first line of each of the main stanzas, and then each line would begin with a much stronger, verb.

You still retain repetition or pattern through the actions (although you're missing "see" in the contradictory stanza).

Another criticism would be to try to avoid just using colors by themselves.  "Green grass", "grey concrete", doesn't really invoke a strong image. Sure, we know what they look like, but we don't feel anything when we picture them.  Either take out the color altogether and replace it with something that evokes feelings of that particular color, or use some strong adjectives.

The irony of the poem is fine, you just need to work on impact because the irony is wasted otherwise.

thanks for the criticism, much appreciate the brutal honesty lol, if i had any ideas of how to edit my poem on here without submitting it all over again i would