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Will There Be A Man ~
Will there be a man that would grab my feet and make love to my ankles
Go beyond to my smooth calves placing kisses gently until he reaches that tender spot behind my knees
Will he pause on my painted thighs teasing my heart as it beats wildly
Will there be a man that would reach across my ivory stomach stopping at my breasts leaving his shine on my perky pink nipples
Could there be a man that would climb making me rise and fall while my breathing shook the air
Go beyond to my smooth calves placing kisses gently until he reaches that tender spot behind my knees
Will he pause on my painted thighs teasing my heart as it beats wildly
Will there be a man that would reach across my ivory stomach stopping at my breasts leaving his shine on my perky pink nipples
Could there be a man that would climb making me rise and fall while my breathing shook the air
Published 6th Jan 2016
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6th Jan 2016 5:05am
Tommie, This is beautifully erotic! I can't guarantee the man but I can guaratee that if you find him he'll be a lucky soul.
6th Jan 2016 2:44pm
The man has been stuck with me for twenty four year's, it's been a ride! Thank you GW I appreciate your words 😊
6th Jan 2016 8:33am
it's a slow sexy trip in the parade of your poem;
you'll be getting offers, Tommie...
you'll be getting offers, Tommie...
6th Jan 2016 2:46pm
Echo JW and GF. A cry from the body as much the heart, put nakedly honestly but elegantly. Men not into doing it this way need not apply!
6th Jan 2016 2:49pm
I completely agree SS, men like this are hard to find....they're out there, somewhere. Thanks for reading me 😊
A rhyming summary came up in mind last night:
Tommielynn, you are a scream!
You have laid bare a wildest dream
Of what you like a man to do
When he's in the bedroom with you!
Tommielynn, you are a scream!
You have laid bare a wildest dream
Of what you like a man to do
When he's in the bedroom with you!
7th Jan 2016 1:36pm
11th Jan 2016 7:06pm
Could not resist describing your wish as an opportunity to be grabbed with both hands!
6th Jan 2016 1:57pm
I love when you come back to us and flood us with your sensual tide
You're the best !!!
You're the best !!!
6th Jan 2016 2:51pm
6th Jan 2016 3:17pm
I enjoyed this Ms Tommie and not only will there be a man to do all those things, but will even trace your body tattoos and so much more ; )
6th Jan 2016 3:35pm
