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"N' Afta Da Flo, it's Da Spat-Cha Hearty..."
As I travel
along the plane
of 'mind flight'
it's in the front row
of the 3rd eye
I find sight...
n' I just know,
'Pon take off
I'm bout to go...
...Insane with vernacular
it's critical, I go ape-shift
into an animal...
I'm a cannibal,
like Hannibal
I shot the specter
of 'Lector' coursin'
' thru the write vein
spillin' ink blood,
black as midnight rain...
I drain the mucus
from verb, yet won't cuss
they fuss as I slant-chant
n' chat, "what's DAT
he spat!? on the high seas
their eyes can't maintain
as I-contend to contain
thy sharp focus...
it's so hopeless to try
n' scope this seer precision...
up among the clouds
the 'sighs have risen'
as I've ridden...hidden,
'Blue's Clues' couldn't
define mind's freed
rhyme's rhythm is
light... it's a little like
written messages,
the 'bottle's capped...'
Kept it on the lowdown
now I'm back, it's the
Verbal Assassin, flossin'
yap...
Hey, don't attempt to
detain this verbal ish,
'wry' ain't the dish
you wanna try, cuz
in one itty bitty blink
of the eye I'm gone,
along on a new ride...
along the plane
of 'mind flight'
it's in the front row
of the 3rd eye
I find sight...
n' I just know,
'Pon take off
I'm bout to go...
...Insane with vernacular
it's critical, I go ape-shift
into an animal...
I'm a cannibal,
like Hannibal
I shot the specter
of 'Lector' coursin'
' thru the write vein
spillin' ink blood,
black as midnight rain...
I drain the mucus
from verb, yet won't cuss
they fuss as I slant-chant
n' chat, "what's DAT
he spat!? on the high seas
their eyes can't maintain
as I-contend to contain
thy sharp focus...
it's so hopeless to try
n' scope this seer precision...
up among the clouds
the 'sighs have risen'
as I've ridden...hidden,
'Blue's Clues' couldn't
define mind's freed
rhyme's rhythm is
light... it's a little like
written messages,
the 'bottle's capped...'
Kept it on the lowdown
now I'm back, it's the
Verbal Assassin, flossin'
yap...
Hey, don't attempt to
detain this verbal ish,
'wry' ain't the dish
you wanna try, cuz
in one itty bitty blink
of the eye I'm gone,
along on a new ride...
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Re. "N' Afta Da Flo, it's Da Spat-Cha Hearty..."
5th Jan 2016 3:07pm
Sounds t HE artist e Kesha or Hesha like. Anyhow A smattering rabbit still recalls (Cayley on t HE phone & DramaCafe on t HE refining tv. Wish u goodly luck. Ali.
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Re: Re. "N' Afta Da Flo, it's Da Spat-Cha Hearty..."
5th Jan 2016 6:46pm
I don't know those folks, but if you liked the ink, I'm good with that! lol
if not that's ok too. Still appreciate the read n thoughts :)
if not that's ok too. Still appreciate the read n thoughts :)
Re. "N' Afta Da Flo, it's Da Spat-Cha Hearty..."
5th Jan 2016 3:52pm
wheeeeeeee! <~ white girl excitement lmfao
this was a feckin blast to read aloud ^.^ i'm proper breathless lol
ohemgee papi, epic flow, fantastic wordplay
loveeeeed
xo
this was a feckin blast to read aloud ^.^ i'm proper breathless lol
ohemgee papi, epic flow, fantastic wordplay
loveeeeed
xo
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Re: Re. "N' Afta Da Flo, it's Da Spat-Cha Hearty..."
5th Jan 2016 6:48pm
Shhhiiittt n you should see ME doing MY happy dance! I'm over hills n thru the woods with ur comment! lol thank u my precious Mami... muah!! deeply appreciate u :)
Re. "N' Afta Da Flo, it's Da Spat-Cha Hearty..."
5th Jan 2016 5:15pm
Re: Re. "N' Afta Da Flo, it's Da Spat-Cha Hearty..."
5th Jan 2016 6:57pm
Lol loved ur comment, n thank u much my dear, just felt the urge to resurrect my Assassin character from a few years ago lol... Happy u enjoyed
grateful always :)
grateful always :)
Re. "N' Afta Da Flo, it's Da Spat-Cha Hearty..."
*wraps gold robe around you as if you were the James Brown of poetic rap lyrics* because you are truly one of the best poets on DUP in regards to rhyme schematics and how you exploit words and control your message. A King at it!
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I'm a cannibal,
like Hannibal
I shot the specter
of 'Lector' coursin'
' thru the write vein
spillin' ink blood,
black as midnight rain... Jeezus! Just brilliant! I know you don't do comps here, but I've often wondered why you don't enter those comps that are centered around rapping/rhyming etc... YOU WOULD SLAY THEM!
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I'm a cannibal,
like Hannibal
I shot the specter
of 'Lector' coursin'
' thru the write vein
spillin' ink blood,
black as midnight rain... Jeezus! Just brilliant! I know you don't do comps here, but I've often wondered why you don't enter those comps that are centered around rapping/rhyming etc... YOU WOULD SLAY THEM!
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Re. "N' Afta Da Flo, it's Da Spat-Cha Hearty..."
5th Jan 2016 7:00pm
Aaaawww wow Rain, u just made me have a moment... lol truly loved the imagery of James, he WAS bad with it huh? lol n ur right I don't do comps. Becuz I'm convinced they are more about popularity than anything else, I've done them many times in the past becuz of requests
but it left a very bad taste in the mouth sooooo... lol thank u for always showin me amazing pen love, I *heart* u :)
but it left a very bad taste in the mouth sooooo... lol thank u for always showin me amazing pen love, I *heart* u :)
Re: Re. "N' Afta Da Flo, it's Da Spat-Cha Hearty..."
5th Jan 2016 7:35pm
Oh honey I completely understand. A lot of those comps are popularity driven winners, depending on the host. I don't enter comps often, but I did use to host comps awhile back here, and I've always had judges who were impartial and just, with a balanced point system as a guideline so I wouldn't have to judge. But I completely agree with you, this whole site is a popularity circus, unfortunately. I just hate it limits your audience to your page....but I feel ya....xo
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Re: Re.
5th Jan 2016 10:19pm
Re. "N' Afta Da Flo, it's Da Spat-Cha Hearty..."
Loved your ink here Po and the jump off was perfect!
As I travel
along the plane
of 'mind flight'
it's in the front row
of the 3rd eye
I find sight...
Always have thought of you as talent from day one brah!
much pen love to you honey ")
Jackie xo
As I travel
along the plane
of 'mind flight'
it's in the front row
of the 3rd eye
I find sight...
Always have thought of you as talent from day one brah!
much pen love to you honey ")
Jackie xo
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Re: Re. "N' Afta Da Flo, it's Da Spat-Cha Hearty..."
6th Jan 2016 1:41pm
Aaawwww... I'm honored you think so
n as always deeply grateful for your continued support my sweet dazzle
Zazzles! :)
n as always deeply grateful for your continued support my sweet dazzle
Zazzles! :)
Re. "N' Afta Da Flo, it's Da Spat-Cha Hearty..."
7th Jan 2016 1:45am
At first I was feeling this to be like some of the social commentary found in some of the best comediennes. Then what became clear is there is a serious dimension as well.
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Re: Re. "N' Afta Da Flo, it's Da Spat-Cha Hearty..."
7th Jan 2016 9:56am
Well I do love to be silly, but this wasn't one of those times, granted I didn't intent 'dead seriousness ' either lol... Thanks a bunch bro. Always grateful for your time n thoughts :)
Re. "N' Afta Da Flo, it's Da Spat-Cha Hearty..."
7th Jan 2016 9:29pm
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8th Jan 2016 2:35am
Re. "N' Afta Da Flo, it's Da Spat-Cha Hearty..."
4th Mar 2016 00:08am
Mercy, Erotic Ninja, luv! :-*
Verbal Assassin, Erotic Ninja, Poetic Lyricist Sublime...
Naught more need be said... :-* :-* :-*
Verbal Assassin, Erotic Ninja, Poetic Lyricist Sublime...
Naught more need be said... :-* :-* :-*
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Re. "N' Afta Da Flo, it's Da Spat-Cha Hearty..."
23rd Mar 2016 3:23pm
bro..this is just the vibe i've been lookin for
phenomenal spillage to spark the neurons!!!!
yezzz sirrrr!!!
phenomenal spillage to spark the neurons!!!!
yezzz sirrrr!!!
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Re: Re. "N' Afta Da Flo, it's Da Spat-Cha Hearty..."
23rd Mar 2016 5:50pm
Well I can only imagine the power of those said neurons when turned-ON!!! Plz allow me a front row seat! lol thanks bro. Always