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My man
From the beginning there was something. We are both observant, both quick with word, and both waiting. You've got this certain swag about you.
and when you open your mouth your words create a melody.
Your funny but without being rude.
you never half to ask if you're a boy or a man cause your build is all man, your posture is all man, and the way you think and take care of business is all man.
Your cocky without being conceded.
your curious without being prideful.
Your not perfect but together we make perfection.
I do not know you but when we meet I will say I DO
and when you open your mouth your words create a melody.
Your funny but without being rude.
you never half to ask if you're a boy or a man cause your build is all man, your posture is all man, and the way you think and take care of business is all man.
Your cocky without being conceded.
your curious without being prideful.
Your not perfect but together we make perfection.
I do not know you but when we meet I will say I DO
Published 4th Jan 2016
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4th Jan 2016 7:26am
Heartfelt and genuine, your first stanza caught my eye.
Watch out for you're when you mean you are and substitute conceited for conceded perhaps in stanza 2.
Watch out for you're when you mean you are and substitute conceited for conceded perhaps in stanza 2.
4th Jan 2016 9:21am
4th Jan 2016 8:53am
"...when you open your mouth your words create a melody..." I absolutely love this line...beautiful!
