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To my jaliee
In a place of despair
don't you dare to copare my life to youre preyer's
might be love might be lust.......... about time
because of you i right this rymes
so happy and confuse at the same time
youre words lead me to belive you might be mine
hope im right this time.....
pleas comment let me know what you guys think all feed back is welcome good or bad!!! tnx...
don't you dare to copare my life to youre preyer's
might be love might be lust.......... about time
because of you i right this rymes
so happy and confuse at the same time
youre words lead me to belive you might be mine
hope im right this time.....
pleas comment let me know what you guys think all feed back is welcome good or bad!!! tnx...
Published 23rd Jun 2011
| Edited 12th Mar 2012
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