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MORNING AFTER NIGHT BEFORE
Warm and tender body close to mine
Lies, after a night of bliss divine,
When we did so merrily entwine
After sharing a bottle of wine.
While still in her sleep she does recline,
I feel the curve of her body's line
With fingers gently run down her spine;
She stirs, moves on me like a feline.
.
Behind the door's "Do not disturb" sign
We marvel what was the grand design
That makes two lives into one align,
While the room fills with the dawn's sunshine.
Lies, after a night of bliss divine,
When we did so merrily entwine
After sharing a bottle of wine.
While still in her sleep she does recline,
I feel the curve of her body's line
With fingers gently run down her spine;
She stirs, moves on me like a feline.
.
Behind the door's "Do not disturb" sign
We marvel what was the grand design
That makes two lives into one align,
While the room fills with the dawn's sunshine.
Published 20th Dec 2015
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21st Dec 2015 10:23pm
This was a fantastic read! I love how nuanced the language is-- this poem is proof that the hidden and unsaid in fact heightens the erotic.
your symmetrical sturdy stanzas provided a great foundation for some beautiful imagery. The image of the "do not disturb sign" was a brilliant addition.
Thank you for sharing your work.
your symmetrical sturdy stanzas provided a great foundation for some beautiful imagery. The image of the "do not disturb sign" was a brilliant addition.
Thank you for sharing your work.
23rd Dec 2015 9:33pm
reading your rhymes, I feel a surge in the urge to merge with a maiden fair with body bare whose pubic hair is displayed without a care.
