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A Man's Pain
Have sympathy for the man who knew no love.
Who's been neglected from up above.
He walks the earth by himself...alone.
He carried his heart so heavy, it turned into stone.
When he cries his blood replaces his tears,
and throughout all his years and his fears,
he is ready to die.
who would want to live when hope is no longer in the sky?
Who's been neglected from up above.
He walks the earth by himself...alone.
He carried his heart so heavy, it turned into stone.
When he cries his blood replaces his tears,
and throughout all his years and his fears,
he is ready to die.
who would want to live when hope is no longer in the sky?
Published 22nd Jun 2011
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24th Jun 2011 5:54am
I like this. You're bringing attention to feelings everyone has now and again, but you'll make it through. You also seem to have a good grasp on rhyme scheme and format. Good job! =)
25th Jun 2011 11:08am
