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Am I Really that Bad
Am I really that bad?
That it's to the point that people say I need help.
The only problem now that's bad.
Is that for me there is no help.
I'm too far different from your point of view.
So much so that you don't even have a clue.
Therefore to all of you I'll only ask.
Am I really that bad?
That it's to the point that people say I need help.
The only problem now that's bad.
Is that for me there is no help.
I'm too far different from your point of view.
So much so that you don't even have a clue.
Therefore to all of you I'll only ask.
Am I really that bad?
Published 17th Dec 2015
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Anonymous
19th Dec 2015 1:14pm
Hey Kavik......no you're not......you're a wonderful caring person......this I know personally......you've held my heart many times and listened my tears away....when all others just walked out of my life caring only of themselves......not reflecting on the piece of my soul they held.......I relate to this far more than I can put into words......I often refer to me as a misfit in life......but you my friend are not......thank you for the caring soul you've allowed me to get to know......luv ya my precious friend xo :)
19th Dec 2015 10:04pm
You aren't that bad. I could ask myself the same thing. Just because there is no one that can help you doesn't mean you are bad. I'm way beyond help. But it doesn't mean you are bad. You are fine the way you are.
26th Dec 2015 1:08am
This is a 'loaded' poem Kavik...
If you're questioning, then maybe you feel there's something that's not quite right within you...
On the other hand people don't like it when others don't conform with conformity...
You need to be YOU, who you really are and sometimes that's difficult to lay a finger on...
Keep searching...
Maybe the only help you need is to find who you are and then have the strength to commit to him.... :)
On the structure of the poem...I'm going to suggest fully realizing its your choice to take on my suggestions
- you loose 'that's it...' at the beginning of the 2nd line...
- you loose 'that' in the 4th line
For a smoother flow of the poem... :)
If you're questioning, then maybe you feel there's something that's not quite right within you...
On the other hand people don't like it when others don't conform with conformity...
You need to be YOU, who you really are and sometimes that's difficult to lay a finger on...
Keep searching...
Maybe the only help you need is to find who you are and then have the strength to commit to him.... :)
On the structure of the poem...I'm going to suggest fully realizing its your choice to take on my suggestions
- you loose 'that's it...' at the beginning of the 2nd line...
- you loose 'that' in the 4th line
For a smoother flow of the poem... :)
29th Dec 2015 00:48am
29th Dec 2015 2:08am
I think it's better to not judge or label each other. (like good or bad) Surviving and coping is not easily done without making serious decisions, sometimes life changing. We do our best, (whether others think it, good or bad) and that's all we can do. We are all unique individuals and from the mere query of your poem, you display a genuine kindheartedness. Be proud of who you are. Peace to you,,, blue angel
2nd Jan 2016 00:00am
if bad is wicked good with honesty.. yesss you are, sweet poet! ;)
"I'm too far different from your point of view"
~ sighing dark shinee agreement here.. true too many times..
strong write, much respect,
~d
"I'm too far different from your point of view"
~ sighing dark shinee agreement here.. true too many times..
strong write, much respect,
~d
2nd Aug 2016 7:46am
