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It's Over

I look at your face, hair, skin
Hoping to touch your lovely lips
Longing to hug you in an embrace tight
Till we pass time in the lonely night

But it seems your thoughts aren't same as mine
You've never left a clue to show I'll be thine
You push me away when I want to be close
To you, �oh! I'm a dreamer I suppose

I made myself a promise not to call again
Because all you give me is hurt and pain
I have tried so hard to kill these desires
I led myself into an emotional quagmire

Now I have made my resolve
Not to think about this, this love
I'm on to the next phase of life
Where you cannot cause me strife.

Written by AIJoe

(Aondokator)

Published 17th Dec 2015

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Re. It's Over

rain1courtel (RainC)

- Edited 18th Dec 2015 00:46am

18th Dec 2015 00:45am

I'm so impressed with your rhyme schematics AlJoe! Rhyming in poetry is so hard to do when you're trying to be taken seriously, instead of sounding cheesy. That's why I admire poets who can pull it off. I'm awful at this form of poetry. I could feel your emotions in this ink saying , "I've had enough!"

Saying it's over is one thing, convincing your heart, is another. Enjoyed this...