Frayed

and one so often
loses the thread..:)

Yes, and the gap's widening  
more and more...
I mind ...

Miss Chi, you paint a poignant picture of love worn thin. Brava!

You always capture the sense of my haiku! Glad about that! Thank you, G_W!

breaking points are violent emotionally, leaving one tattered

Well done

 

Though emotions are elastic and may be stretched to certain extend, with putting too much strain on them they'll disrupt someday ... silently...unnoticed even.
Thank you, Lobo, always appreciate your wise words :-).

so much disruption in the seams.
well written, Chi...

The heart, strong muscle and frail tissue ...
host of the beginnings and endings of happiness and pain.
Thank you for reading and commenting, John!

I like it my dear, BUT I'm wonderin'
If FELT might be a better fit than
feels? Just an opinion, either way
U rock as always! :)

Poe, my dear! Thank you so much for leaving your insightful and welcome comment! I don't know if 'felt' might be a better or even the grammatically correct option. You are the native speaker whom I thank a lot for giving me the chance to learn! If it's the case that 'feel' ist wrong, I surely will correct my version into yours. *hugs*! Is it?

Grateful Chi :-)

We tend to lose so much time trying to cross the gap vs. walking on and meeting again.
Always look forward to your depth through brevity, Chi.

Sometimes it's worthwhile to bridge the gaps and walk on together.
We'll see what time will bring.
Thanks for your kind comment. Ahavati!

I adore this, Miss Chi
very clever :)

I'm very glad about your lovely words, Miki! Thank you so much :-)!

Love your writing. It always feels as if you're writing just for me.

I feel honored by your words, forever_young, and much appreciate them, as I just write from my heart. If it touches you, it makes me happy. Maybe we're somehow alike ...

I believe we are very much alike. I feel in awe thinking so...