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a weapon
take all the pain
and anger you
feel mold it,shape
it into a pointed object
the file that down to a
razor sharp edge now
you have a weapon
and anger you
feel mold it,shape
it into a pointed object
the file that down to a
razor sharp edge now
you have a weapon
Published 13th Dec 2015
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17th Dec 2015 8:16pm
I like the subtle consonance between "down" and "now." In fact, I like the whole thing, but it feels like only the beginning of the story, like you're holding back.
Unleash yourself!
Unleash yourself!
