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the final pull

As i close my eyes, i remember your taste,the taste that led to my demise.
No pain can i feel now,no hateful words cascade upon my brow.
I embrace the dark like an old friend,for my journey is now at its end.
Sorrow i no longer feel and it all seems so surreal.
Slipping into your warm cloak,leaving behind this ugly joke.
No tears shall fall upon my face,because forever i hated this place.
My body i look on as i die,from a cloud in the sky.
As my brain goes to sleep,i no longer have to weep.
Angel wings softly caress,as my soul finally finds rest .....
Written by crickstreetking
Published | Edited 22nd Jun 2011
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