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Paint Me With Your Artistry
Know that I love you, in a manner of speaking
That speaks poetically from deep within my heart
In a manner that knows no boundaries nor limits
That knows of friendship and respect and caring
For your mind and heart and soul
And the moon that orbits from afar
Yet lights the darkness that surrounds you
Consuming phantoms that haunted the past
I wish I had such unconditional light
Shining on the shadows of the night
For one as old and broken as the promises of youth
Who desires to mend your pain with truth
To heal your muse and inspire your ink
To unfurl a fallen angel's wings
And lift your spirit to the eagles eye
Then paint my heart across your sky
Dripping with passion in every hue
Rekindle in me all I'll inspire you
Let us share the wealth of fertile fine arts
Born within two creative hearts
Know that I love you in all manner of speaking
In words to express the feeling I'm seeking
Draw me an artist that makes love by design
With but a pencil, make me fall for each line
Create with me in every manner
A bond to build a warm stately manor
Where clouds cannot obscure crystal blue skies
Spray your paint fore an admirer's eyes
Spread your paint for this poet's eyes
That speaks poetically from deep within my heart
In a manner that knows no boundaries nor limits
That knows of friendship and respect and caring
For your mind and heart and soul
And the moon that orbits from afar
Yet lights the darkness that surrounds you
Consuming phantoms that haunted the past
I wish I had such unconditional light
Shining on the shadows of the night
For one as old and broken as the promises of youth
Who desires to mend your pain with truth
To heal your muse and inspire your ink
To unfurl a fallen angel's wings
And lift your spirit to the eagles eye
Then paint my heart across your sky
Dripping with passion in every hue
Rekindle in me all I'll inspire you
Let us share the wealth of fertile fine arts
Born within two creative hearts
Know that I love you in all manner of speaking
In words to express the feeling I'm seeking
Draw me an artist that makes love by design
With but a pencil, make me fall for each line
Create with me in every manner
A bond to build a warm stately manor
Where clouds cannot obscure crystal blue skies
Spray your paint fore an admirer's eyes
Spread your paint for this poet's eyes
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Re. Paint Me With Your Artistry
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Dec 2015 2:53pm
9th Dec 2015 2:48pm
man oh man..this speaks on many levels..
the title first and foremost
the flow
the metaphors
the composition
the choice of words
the simplistic beauty
the reaching out for connectivity
the self excavation
"wish I had such unconditional light "
how that spoke volumes to me!!!
this is so inspiring
thank you for sharing this gem
much respect!!!!

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Re: Re. Paint Me With Your Artistry
9th Dec 2015 3:48pm
Thank you for the most gracious comment Naajir. I find that writing what I'm feeling in the moment is the only way to write poetry that will touch the heart of the one you want to hear you. It just comes out without much thought, as if my heart has a mind of its own, or perhaps my mind has a heart of its own... jj
Re. Paint Me With Your Artistry
9th Dec 2015 3:56pm
Woow, Jj. I have to come back to this
because it's.. it's exclusively written
from every pump of blood and canal
you consist of. Your heart, soul and
mind all came together as III - trinity,
divine-like.
Can feel it, and most of all.. that's
what we want to do is "aspire to inspire
our love's as they do us".
Oh my sweet gods.. . you've got my
pre'eternal feelers shook .. I'll be
back..
Miss'd your page by the way
-Howlings
because it's.. it's exclusively written
from every pump of blood and canal
you consist of. Your heart, soul and
mind all came together as III - trinity,
divine-like.
Can feel it, and most of all.. that's
what we want to do is "aspire to inspire
our love's as they do us".
Oh my sweet gods.. . you've got my
pre'eternal feelers shook .. I'll be
back..
Miss'd your page by the way
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Paint Me With Your Artistry
9th Dec 2015 4:09pm
Thank you Howlings, you are very generous with kind words. I truly appreciate your praise... jj
Re: Re. Paint Me With Your Artistry
10th Dec 2015 6:17am
Am still daunted as for as grasping this one Jj,
just never have read anything so honoring
and in depth, from you like this before. You've
spoken to a circulation of us, who wish to
breathe out as you have done here..
Striking..
-Howlings
just never have read anything so honoring
and in depth, from you like this before. You've
spoken to a circulation of us, who wish to
breathe out as you have done here..
Striking..
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Paint Me With Your Artistry
10th Dec 2015 6:24am
Re. Paint Me With Your Artistry
9th Dec 2015 5:18pm
Ahhh, Poetryman, luv ~ :-*
This is a glorious piece indeed. I hope your poem reaches the one for whom tis intended.
Your innate kindness, decency, and integrity will beckon with warmth, luv, and surely will inspire and uplift. :-*
Your writing is elegant, sweet as gentle summer rain upon the tongue, and bespeaks quiet magnificence.
This is a glorious piece indeed. I hope your poem reaches the one for whom tis intended.
Your innate kindness, decency, and integrity will beckon with warmth, luv, and surely will inspire and uplift. :-*
Your writing is elegant, sweet as gentle summer rain upon the tongue, and bespeaks quiet magnificence.
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Re: Re. Paint Me With Your Artistry
9th Dec 2015 8:09pm
Thank you Savaja, that was a wonderful comment! The future is an unknown, mysterious place...
Re. Paint Me With Your Artistry
9th Dec 2015 9:12pm
it is so long since I have read such beauty, such artistry - this for me is easily the best poem I have read of yours you have hit the jackpot with this one, this is award winning stuff worthy of a first prize - I have ran out of words to describe its beauty and would happily let your words speak and paint for themselves :-)
simply wonderful :-)
simply wonderful :-)
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Re: Re. Paint Me With Your Artistry
9th Dec 2015 9:20pm
No David, I did not write it about you... lololololol
Ha, I just couldn't resist. Thank you for the amazing praise. I'm not sure how the one I wrote it for will feel when she reads it but it is most heart-felt! JJ
Ha, I just couldn't resist. Thank you for the amazing praise. I'm not sure how the one I wrote it for will feel when she reads it but it is most heart-felt! JJ
Re. Paint Me With Your Artistry
12th Dec 2015 2:00am
JJ......absolutely beautiful words.......I'm luvin this......you're such a tender luving soul......RL for me xo :)
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Re. Paint Me With Your Artistry
14th Dec 2015 4:36am
Wow! My goodness jj! This is nothing short of stunning!
Too many beautiful lines for me to pick favorites. I love the entire poem....
Too many beautiful lines for me to pick favorites. I love the entire poem....
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Oh Rain, your comments mean so much to m, especially when on poems that mean so much to me! Thank you to the extremes!!! It is not always easy to express love that touches me on this many levels so deep inside of me. Sometimes I am afraid of the waves that will crash on my shores when the tide rushes in to erase the words etched into my shoreline.
JJ
JJ
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3rd Jan 2016 5:56am
P-CG-LP
I was feeling so inspired after you agreed to do the cover, this is for you...
In all manner of speaking,
JJ
I was feeling so inspired after you agreed to do the cover, this is for you...
In all manner of speaking,
JJ
Re: Re. Paint Me With Your Artistry
Anonymous
16th Apr 2016 12:04pm
She sounds like an amazing artist and woman to have inspired this masterpiece of poetry and love! I absolutely love it!

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2nd Oct 2016 12:44pm
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Re. Paint Me With Your Artistry
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2016 12:48pm
Oh how nice to hear your voice reading this poem. I had to comment again as this beautiful poem is brought to life. Doubly wonderful now!

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3rd Oct 2016 4:01am
Re. Paint Me With Your Artistry
3rd Oct 2016 3:06am
JJ, this is a truly gorgeous declaration! I don't even know where to begin...I don't know how anyone could not be touched by this. So beautiful! :)
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3rd Oct 2016 4:05am
Re. Paint Me With Your Artistry
24th Oct 2023 9:41am
Re: Re. Paint Me With Your Artistry
Thank you Lil! It is wonderful to have you reading my long ago poems! I feel you in my soul and it feels beautiful!!!
JJ
And thank you for the RL add as well!
JJ
And thank you for the RL add as well!