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Catatonia
gaunt
sunken eyes
cheekbones protruding beneath taut skin
the man twisted around
taking note of the rising sun
colors intertwined above
creating hints of deep red
submerged by usual oranges and pinks
the lake still
fully hushed
water engulfing the scene
he took a knee
listening
the waking sun whispering his next move
his eyes wandered to the ground
his once clear mind now in a haze
with the trance now broken
he stepped over the body
and grasped the shovel
sunken eyes
cheekbones protruding beneath taut skin
the man twisted around
taking note of the rising sun
colors intertwined above
creating hints of deep red
submerged by usual oranges and pinks
the lake still
fully hushed
water engulfing the scene
he took a knee
listening
the waking sun whispering his next move
his eyes wandered to the ground
his once clear mind now in a haze
with the trance now broken
he stepped over the body
and grasped the shovel
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