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curve
Sometimes it seems
too random for coincidence
On a surface unequal
to any sense of belief
Tho,
as the movements of nature
Pursue their true course
I'm led in directions
of serendipitous discovery
Constantly finding myself
In the company of stranger's
Delivering clues
for the next phase in this quest
Riddled by visions
Confused with emotion
Unaware of what's comming
yet unafraid to continue
A fixture within this labyrinth
Fulfilling a secret dream...
too random for coincidence
On a surface unequal
to any sense of belief
Tho,
as the movements of nature
Pursue their true course
I'm led in directions
of serendipitous discovery
Constantly finding myself
In the company of stranger's
Delivering clues
for the next phase in this quest
Riddled by visions
Confused with emotion
Unaware of what's comming
yet unafraid to continue
A fixture within this labyrinth
Fulfilling a secret dream...
Published 6th Dec 2015
| Edited 12th Dec 2015
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11th Dec 2015 5:50pm
A very mysterious piece you have here. I enjoyed the concepts of serendipitous discovery and delivering clues to strangers. I also liked the fearless nature of the narrator. Nice work.
PS
On a critical note, I believe the 'to' intended the second line should be 'too'. Sometimes grammar can be easily overlooked, but in this case the two words are different yet similar enough that it can cause some confusion to the reader.
PS
On a critical note, I believe the 'to' intended the second line should be 'too'. Sometimes grammar can be easily overlooked, but in this case the two words are different yet similar enough that it can cause some confusion to the reader.
12th Dec 2015 4:32am
Thanx for the notes! Simple mistakes can slide by. One only see's what is wanted to be heard. Will adjust appropriately. Keep Grindin CAOS737
