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Pebble in the Pond
Pebble thrown.
A watery mirror broken.
Rippling effects
swell
around the point of impact.
Liquid wrinkles
spread,
ever widening,
touching
shores
of uncharted land;
regarding reeds yet
unborn.
A watery mirror broken.
Rippling effects
swell
around the point of impact.
Liquid wrinkles
spread,
ever widening,
touching
shores
of uncharted land;
regarding reeds yet
unborn.
Published 5th Dec 2015
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5th Dec 2015 1:25pm
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Very Nice
Effect
Here with the spacing. Used to have very deep convo with myself skippin stones in a pond at my home in the country...
A very cool image..and you can insert your own thought...love..life in as the refection being broken, and many cool ideas come in play...
Great job darlin!
Very Nice
Effect
Here with the spacing. Used to have very deep convo with myself skippin stones in a pond at my home in the country...
A very cool image..and you can insert your own thought...love..life in as the refection being broken, and many cool ideas come in play...
Great job darlin!
5th Dec 2015 1:50pm
Awesome poem... made me pause and reflect on the beauty of the effect you've captured in words.....
PS:- on a diff note... your profile pic reminds me of this...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ez-HIQQxEI
PS:- on a diff note... your profile pic reminds me of this...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ez-HIQQxEI
5th Dec 2015 4:25pm
Lol kd earlier i tol em i.wanted to smack it! Thas what it reminds me of..smackin ayyuss!
With a whip! Whhooopa!
With a whip! Whhooopa!
5th Dec 2015 5:50pm
5th Dec 2015 5:30pm
