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Silent Night
I lay my soul at your heart tonight
here I am at the mercy of desire
luv me to the edge of sanity
luv me till my screams break glass
make this body dance and quiver at a fingers touch
in silence of this night take me for all that I am
speak to me without voice
soft touches across my skin is what I want
flesh on flesh all night is what I long for
ravage my mind into a state of thoughtlessness
take our world of fantasy and let it become real
even if just for this one night
let us be as we are one being
sharing hot passion in the darkness
fire singeing our senses to oblivious
beyond the stars on this silent night
make all the luv in heavens be ours
let's make the Angels sing "hallelujah"
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
here I am at the mercy of desire
luv me to the edge of sanity
luv me till my screams break glass
make this body dance and quiver at a fingers touch
in silence of this night take me for all that I am
speak to me without voice
soft touches across my skin is what I want
flesh on flesh all night is what I long for
ravage my mind into a state of thoughtlessness
take our world of fantasy and let it become real
even if just for this one night
let us be as we are one being
sharing hot passion in the darkness
fire singeing our senses to oblivious
beyond the stars on this silent night
make all the luv in heavens be ours
let's make the Angels sing "hallelujah"
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Silent Night
5th Dec 2015 1:41am
Wow This is an beautiful poem about erotic love and shows wonderful insight your an wonderful writer don't stop now! By your amazing talent your destined for great big things!
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5th Dec 2015 2:08am
Thank you Dameon......again welcome to DU......what awesome words you leave me to smile upon my page......thank you for suck encouragement......glad you enjoyed xo :)
Re. Silent Night
Anonymous
5th Dec 2015 1:47am
Ahhh such a tender sensuous love scene.
And the picture, looks like you are "flirting with purple again"
Hot, steamy and slooow good!
And the picture, looks like you are "flirting with purple again"
Hot, steamy and slooow good!
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5th Dec 2015 2:12am
Hey SG.....glad you enjoyed getting all hot and steamy with this purple Lady......have not forgotten "flirting with purple".....thank you for the smile upon my page xo :)
Re. Silent Night
Reading your desires make an long dead heart cry out from the grave to shatter the casket holding me down... not so silent a night after all! your imagery and metaphor make love to my mind like Winnie the Pooh with his head stuck in a pot of honey... yummmmmy
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5th Dec 2015 2:16am
Hi ya JJ.....happy to see your smile on my page......I'm so happy your night isn't so silent tonight.....I hear honey is so.....um.....sweet licking.....yummy!! Thank you for a much needed laugh and smile tonight......xo :)
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Anonymous
5th Dec 2015 2:24am
THIS is an in your face piece of work. You have a captive audience I see,
and I am merely a new comer to your fine artful poetry. Keep posting
them, I'll for sure keep reading and commenting.
and I am merely a new comer to your fine artful poetry. Keep posting
them, I'll for sure keep reading and commenting.
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Re: Re. Silent Night
5th Dec 2015 2:30am
Awe Scooter.....thank you for the sweet encouragment......glad you've joined me on my corner......while I was gone I read all your ink......you're a wonderful poet and have gained many friends here.....appreciate you smiling upon my page once again.....xo :)
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5th Dec 2015 2:28am
Re: Re. Silent Night
5th Dec 2015 2:32am
Hi Kavik my friend.....yes yes.....you're so right.....thank you for sharing a smile tonight xo :)
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Re: Re. Silent Night
6th Dec 2015 1:40am
Hey Sweet S......"old tricks" haha.....you betcha!! Thank your for your sweet words and for sharing the luv......always smiling when you stop by.....luv and hugs xo :)
Re. Silent Night
5th Dec 2015 6:41pm
I love your sweetness Flower! Even at your most passionate there's no ugliness to your writes. You're always a comfort (and often a turn on) to read. "Flesh on flesh all night is what I long for." Maybe so, but that doesn't preclude a visit from angels, a holy night with a difference.
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Re: Re. Silent Night
6th Dec 2015 1:46am
Hi Crow......always feel the warmness of your smile upon my page.......I'm glad my writes move you......im very riches by your sweet words.....thank you xo :)
Re. Silent Night
6th Dec 2015 10:14am
A silent night that hopefully was sexually raucous minutes earlier! lol
Sweet spill lady :)
Sweet spill lady :)
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Re: Re. Silent Night
7th Dec 2015 6:36pm
Poet......you so made me laugh and smile......thank you!! Appreciate you taking time to come my way xo :)