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Twin Flames......
that's what you and I are
two souls that luv in spirit
beyond anything physical
we are an ocean apart
yet feel each other so close
connected thru our spirits
ocean is the mystery of us
cause somewhere across it
our souls rise from the water
our kisses meet upon salty lips
no distance between our souls
they embrace on white caped waves
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
two souls that luv in spirit
beyond anything physical
we are an ocean apart
yet feel each other so close
connected thru our spirits
ocean is the mystery of us
cause somewhere across it
our souls rise from the water
our kisses meet upon salty lips
no distance between our souls
they embrace on white caped waves
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Twin Flames......
5th Dec 2015 3:35am
Flower, this a brilliant write.. love your flow, and description.. nicely done.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Twin Flames......
6th Dec 2015 1:56am
HI Diamond.....I'm so happy you enjoyed this one.....it's one of my favorites......thank you for your warm smile upon my page......respect back at ya xo :)
Re. Twin Flames......
Anonymous
5th Dec 2015 3:41am
Someone is inspiring some amazing writes.
It is nice to feel your lovely spirit again on these pages.
It is nice to feel your lovely spirit again on these pages.
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Re: Re. Twin Flames......
Awe SG......you're making blush and tear at the same time......you know me though.....I tell no secrets......LOL!!! Thank you for your humbling words...good to see your set self here ..xo :)
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5th Dec 2015 3:43am
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6th Dec 2015 2:09am
Hey Kavik.....ships ahoy matey.....oh wait that's pirates.....LOL!! Thank you for the smile xo :)
Re. Twin Flames......
5th Dec 2015 4:20am
Wow truly amazing it's like everytime i read one of your poems flower girl you never yet tend to amaze me this is just an astounding poem that speaks of love and passion and it touched me and made me feel warm inside I remember when I first began to date in 9th grade that feeling that spark that made me feel amazing and that's what your poem reminded me of. XD
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Re: Re. Twin Flames......
6th Dec 2015 2:12am
Thank you Dameon for sharing such a memory with me......makes my write even more special to me that it brings a feeling of warmth and a smile from the past.....xo :)
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5th Dec 2015 9:56am
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6th Dec 2015 2:16am
Hi Poet....happy to see your smiling eyes upon my page.....found the pic before the write......it is beautiful.....thrilled you liked both......thank you xo :)
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Re: Re. Twin Flames......
6th Dec 2015 2:23am
Sweet S.....thank you for a wonderful warm smile......appreciate you bringing some warm fuzzies with you......luv and hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
5th Dec 2015 2:55pm
Beautifully rendered, Flower, very much so.
Oceans cannot keep love from flowing
within the hearts to two possessed souls.
You write with amazing insights my friend.
Oceans cannot keep love from flowing
within the hearts to two possessed souls.
You write with amazing insights my friend.
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Re: Re. Twin Flames......
6th Dec 2015 2:19am
Hi Scooter.....you're making me blush......you're right....luv finds a way to a soul no matter the distance between two hearts.....honored by the RL add on......thank you xo :)
Re. Twin Flames......
5th Dec 2015 6:33pm
There's the saying that "distance makes the heart grow fonder." You catch that beautifully here, Flower. Having an ocean between you and your love need not be a deterrent. Excellent work! You're both a flower and a flame....
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6th Dec 2015 2:52am
Awe Crow......I believe you can feel a soul you luv no matter where they are......you always feel their heart within yours......never far apart......your words bring warmness my way......thank you xo :)