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Your Rationality
after all this time do you finally believe
in the luv that's always been yours
wonder why you're just now trusting in that
or are you still seeing things that aren't there
look into these teary eyes and feel
this soul that your lack of trust destroys
another's closeness has left my soul
he's gone from me cause of my luv for you
which has never weakened from the start
are you truly finally at peace with yourself
you should've felt calmness from my kisses and luv
congrats for winning a battle against your own mind
have you not had true faith in me or my luv
what is it I haven't done to prove loyalty
that you do not know this heart is all yours
when I say I'm just friends with another
it's no more than that beyond the heart
friends are one thing....luvers are another
if after all of what I've given to you of me
you can't tell the difference from the two
our luv will always be tainted with your insecurities
how much more can I luv ya beyond my soul
(This comes from multiple hearts and voices)
(Been contemplating this one for a while)
(Sorry to those it may hurt....truth is the truth)
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
in the luv that's always been yours
wonder why you're just now trusting in that
or are you still seeing things that aren't there
look into these teary eyes and feel
this soul that your lack of trust destroys
another's closeness has left my soul
he's gone from me cause of my luv for you
which has never weakened from the start
are you truly finally at peace with yourself
you should've felt calmness from my kisses and luv
congrats for winning a battle against your own mind
have you not had true faith in me or my luv
what is it I haven't done to prove loyalty
that you do not know this heart is all yours
when I say I'm just friends with another
it's no more than that beyond the heart
friends are one thing....luvers are another
if after all of what I've given to you of me
you can't tell the difference from the two
our luv will always be tainted with your insecurities
how much more can I luv ya beyond my soul
(This comes from multiple hearts and voices)
(Been contemplating this one for a while)
(Sorry to those it may hurt....truth is the truth)
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Your Rationality
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Dec 2015 5:15pm
3rd Dec 2015 5:14pm
Good to see you back writing, Flower. This one
is filled with misspend passion. There is no
doubt that someone is, as you said, very insecure
withing their makeup. A shame, especially when
such insecurity causes much heartache. Again,
I am happy to see you back posting here . . .
is filled with misspend passion. There is no
doubt that someone is, as you said, very insecure
withing their makeup. A shame, especially when
such insecurity causes much heartache. Again,
I am happy to see you back posting here . . .
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Re: Re. Your Rationality
4th Dec 2015 3:32am
Hi Scooter......so good to see you again.....thank you for bringing me a smile upon my page......yes jealously and insecurities whatever they are can cause much pain......this was a reminder a few souls of ha much it hurts the others heart......appreciate you much xo :)
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
3rd Dec 2015 6:42pm
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Re: Re. Your Rationality
4th Dec 2015 3:54am
Sweet S.....HI.....I'm happy to see your beautiful smile upon my page......well every now and then a reminder has to be rendered just how much insecurities can hurt......you're right.....relationships can't survive with them......much luv and many hugs back your way xo :)
Re. Your Rationality
3rd Dec 2015 7:17pm
I've missed you Flower! It's so good to see you writing again.
You ink is always full of deep emotions.
I think that as with any relationship, you can only give so much and if it isn't cherished and appreciated, then you must let it go. Not eveyone deserves the heart of an Angel.
You've given a great voice to those hearts sweetheart and I wish them tranquility and happiness. There is so much life can give and all we have to do is enjoy it and leave the negativity behind ; )
You ink is always full of deep emotions.
I think that as with any relationship, you can only give so much and if it isn't cherished and appreciated, then you must let it go. Not eveyone deserves the heart of an Angel.
You've given a great voice to those hearts sweetheart and I wish them tranquility and happiness. There is so much life can give and all we have to do is enjoy it and leave the negativity behind ; )
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Re: Re. Your Rationality
4th Dec 2015 4:03am
Hey Sexy Lena.....Thank you for bringing your smile upon my page. Exactly!!! Can give so much of your soul to so win before you lose yourself.....then it's time when you realize it's costing your health and sanity.....it's time to end it regardless.......I needed to voice this more for a few other souls than myself......it has impacted who it was meant to.....always appreciate your luv you bring my way......luv and hugs xo :)
Re. Your Rationality
3rd Dec 2015 10:45pm
Excellent work Flower. There's pain here but your sweetness is still unmistakable. Your work is always tender, and in that alone it's refreshing. So good to see you!
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Re: Re. Your Rationality
4th Dec 2015 5:23am
Awe Crow.....you've made me smile as always....good to see you too......thank you for your sweet words.......glad you enjoyed xo :)
Re. Your Rationality
Anonymous
4th Dec 2015 2:50am
FG you have captured emotion of the eternal trust issues. How some tmes they end up with more of the life than the love does.
"are you truly finally at peace with yourself
you should've felt calmness from my kisses and luv
congrats for winning a battle against your own mind "
Very sad indeed, but as always grand and gracefull
"are you truly finally at peace with yourself
you should've felt calmness from my kisses and luv
congrats for winning a battle against your own mind "
Very sad indeed, but as always grand and gracefull
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Re: Re. Your Rationality
4th Dec 2015 5:28am
Hey SG.....thrilled you stopped by with your ever pleasant smile......yes unfortunately it sucks the life out of you.....such a strain another's insecurities will cause on your heart and soul.....luv should never be that way.....thank you for your visit to me xo :)
Re. Your Rationality
4th Dec 2015 3:02am
Re: Re. Your Rationality
4th Dec 2015 5:32am
Awe Kavik my sweet friend......great to see your smile as well.....thank you....glad you liked this.....xo :)
Re. Your Rationality
7th Dec 2015 11:52pm
....yes, yes, I understand this beautiful ink so much clearer now!
"have you not had true faith in me or my luv
what is it I haven't done to prove loyalty
that you do not know this heart is all yours "
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When I read this^^^^ and the entire poem for that matter, the song 'If You Don't Know Me By Now' by Harold Melvin & The Blue Notes came to mind. So appropriate for this lovely ink!
"have you not had true faith in me or my luv
what is it I haven't done to prove loyalty
that you do not know this heart is all yours "
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
When I read this^^^^ and the entire poem for that matter, the song 'If You Don't Know Me By Now' by Harold Melvin & The Blue Notes came to mind. So appropriate for this lovely ink!
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Re: Re. Your Rationality
8th Dec 2015 3:08am
Sweet Rain......I'm so happy to see your smile upon my page......it was such a comfort to talk with you today......thank you for your luv and friendship!! Thank you for your words here to me......I luv those songs......they do fit this write for sure......glad to see you again.....luv and hugs xo :)
Re. Your Rationality
15th Dec 2015 11:35pm
Re: Re. Your Rationality
16th Dec 2015 3:55am
My sweet friend......how honored I am to see you on my page.......thank you for bringing such a great smile xo :)