Breath

Hooha!! Aarrrti unleashed! Im loving these spunky fun writes dove..just so much!
Two tjumbs waaay up!
Love
Jen

Oh Jenn love yaaa :)

Please read my erotic poem

a very passionate, sexy erotic aarti :)

I love it!

love Crim

Thank you Crim :) you are such a great erotica writer, I am happy you liked it.

Please read my erotic poem

Sure I will :)

The kiss is like a fuse
Once lit, can explode into all kids of fun!
very pasionate

I agree with you slowgasm :) thank you

Makes me wonder who's really in control here, Aarti.  You've got your savage beast but he seems to need some instructions.  Tipping him off to what turns you on is the way to go.   Eliminate the guess work.

"Don't breathe
you savage beast
grab that hair
Don't just stare"

And I like the way you keep the beast close at the end.  I'm sure he loves his mistress.

Hahaha crow..I like to believe I am in control..at least this time. :)

Gosh! I was all out of breath reading that! I think you controlled the situation well! Strong piece of writing, very choppy and fast paced.

Thank you. If it did make you go out of breath, then my poetry has done its duty. :)

so passionate!!!

:)