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We Need Better Children
in God we trust.
but in guns we bust.
what the fuck is wrong with us. with us.
we killing our children.
in God we trust.
but without condoms we bust.
what the fuck is wrong with us. with us.
we making unwanted children.
in God we trust.
but God don't trust none of us.
not when we busting guns. and busting nuts.
we need to better our children.
they need to be better than us. than us.
but in guns we bust.
what the fuck is wrong with us. with us.
we killing our children.
in God we trust.
but without condoms we bust.
what the fuck is wrong with us. with us.
we making unwanted children.
in God we trust.
but God don't trust none of us.
not when we busting guns. and busting nuts.
we need to better our children.
they need to be better than us. than us.
Published 29th Nov 2015
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22nd Dec 2015 3:41pm
A succinct poem that displays a clear passionate message. I liked the concept of "in God we trust" and how you explored the variations of that. Great writing.
Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for sharing.
